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[作文互改] issue 6 抛弃了假大空,但是语言不好而且字数不够求指导

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发表于 2013-8-27 14:07:21 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
Anation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculumuntil they enter college.  
Should a nation equip all students with thesame national curriculum until they enter college? Refering to this issue,people’s opinions diverse. For my view, although I admit this way surely bringssome good effects, it is not always the case under a variety of conditions.
Admitedly, learning the same nationalcurriculum can open the students’ horizontal and extend their view. Taking anexample, there are all kinds of students who have different interests. If theyenter the society, they may face a lot of difficulties when the field they areinterested have little chances. While if they study the same curriculum earlier,they should have knowledge and skills on more fields. Therefore, requiringstudents to study the same national curriculum can surely have its merits.
However, under many circumstances, it isnot practical to put it into practice. It is certain that letting all studentsreceive the same curriculum will bring gargantuan costs. Some states orprovinces of a nation may be wealthy and affording the huge expense is notdifficult. But some states may have less financial power to pay the bill and ifthis plan is implemented, the fields except for education may suffer from lackof money. Thus, it is not a reasonable plan.
In addition, even though the plan isfeasible all around the country. It is not necessary ,too. One famous Chineseeducator Confusion said that education should always serve for people. Somestudents may have their own intrestes and dreams and they should have had timeto strive for it. But the studying of the curriculum will spend a lot of timewithout doubt. On the other hand, many schools and colleges are focused on onemajor ,such as arts school. Learning the curriculum may be not bad but surelyunnecessary. To an extent, it’s a educational waste.
On balance, the author’s assertion,although having its merits, suffers from serious drawbacks. In my view, in someoccasions ,it is feasible, but the feasibility should depend on the conditions.
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-27 18:44:19 | 只看该作者
求不要沉
板凳
发表于 2013-8-27 22:34:05 | 只看该作者

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发表于 2013-8-27 23:37:03 | 只看该作者
作者可以考虑加入互改小组,这样可以及时得到修改,同时通过修改别人的作文提高自己的水平
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-28 09:25:40 | 只看该作者
竹林中人 发表于 2013-8-27 23:37
作者可以考虑加入互改小组,这样可以及时得到修改,同时通过修改别人的作文提高自己的水平 ...

好的,不知如何加入
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susansan77 发表于 2013-8-28 09:25
好的,不知如何加入

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