我觉得C这里those是指代rates of entrepreneurship, 所以exceeding之后就是“rates of entrepreneurship of every other immigrant …”
所以这里会感觉有一点不平行,一个是rates of entrepreneurship,另外一个是rates of entrepreneurship of every other immigrant …。很多人说those就是指代rates,我觉得这样翻译就不通了,我认为这里的rates应是指代rates of entrepreneurship,可能exceed不要求完全对应的。