prep08-1-187的E选项，没讨论过！

cheesencat

United States Senator Daniel Inouye was appointed to several posts within the Democratic party during his first term, that included assistant majority whip and vice-chair of the Democratic Senatorial Committee.
A. that included
B. which includes
C. including
D. some of which were
E. among them being

已看讨论贴，没搜到Ron的解释，请大牛解释E选项！我已知道C最好、我想的是assistant majority whip and vice-chair of the Democratic Senatorial Committee are among the several posts，可以的吧？

小宇宙4128

这样有run-on sentence的感觉吧，不简洁，真没including好

拙见！

cheesencat

小宇宙4128 发表于 2013-8-19 19:33
这样有run-on sentence的感觉吧，不简洁，真没including好

拙见！

run on应该是指两个句子却被不能分隔两个句子的成分(如逗号）连在了一起，所以这里不是run on。
它确实没有C好。
只是C太熟悉了，我有点不敢选,额。。。

小宇宙4128

cheesencat 发表于 2013-8-19 22:09
run on应该是指两个句子却被不能分隔两个句子的成分(如逗号）连在了一起，所以这里不是run on。
它确实没 ...

run-on sentence因该是指fail to use the right punctuation and/or conneting words to join two clauses.
wrong: i need to relex, i habve so many things to do.(run-on sentence)
right: i need to relax, but i have so many things to do.

a comma is not enough to join two main clauses. a sentence that violates this rule is called a run-on sentence.

曼哈顿chapter10-1 connecting words

cheesencat

小宇宙4128 发表于 2013-8-20 09:47
run-on sentence因该是指fail to use the right punctuation and/or conneting words to join two clause ...

run on是这个意思。
但是我意思是among them being开头的这个不是句子呀

春雨Q

RON直接说E是horrible。。。。

cheesencat

春雨Q 发表于 2013-10-29 21:54
RON直接说E是horrible。。。。

现在来看的确是！

春雨Q

cheesencat 发表于 2013-11-2 01:05
现在来看的确是！

做题多了看一些选项看都不想看就觉得horrible。。。

加油~

cheesencat

春雨Q 发表于 2013-11-2 15:15
做题多了看一些选项看都不想看就觉得horrible。。。

加油~

那真不错！加油～