OG13 35 的wordy问题，没人问过，难道只有我自己在纠结吗？？？？求帮助啊~

rebeccadu1

35. By 1940, [url=]the pilot Jacqueline Cochran held seventeen[/url] official national and international speed records, and she earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be of dangerously experimental design.

(A) and she earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be

(B) earning them at a time that aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be

(C) earning these at a time where aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were

(D) earned at a time in which aviation was still so new such that many of the planes she flew were

(E) earned at a time when aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were

我想问一下A 选项哪里WORDY 了。。。我觉得A挺好的啊、、、、E 选项的earn 后面不加点东西总觉得怪怪的。。
求解释！！！

qiuzhongbo

A 应该是so…that吧 而且earned是修饰records 个人理解

skyemotion

wordy的原因应该是增加了she，从句和主句主语一直时，从句主语需要省略。
后面的那个for可以理解成为连词，因为。

alvlen

qiuzhongbo 发表于 2013-8-15 14:26
A 应该是so…that吧 而且earned是修饰records 个人理解

非常同意（为了凑齐10个字）

qiongle

and she earned就已经是wordy了，相比较而言were难道不比to be简洁？另外就是so that 的问题了

yy20

skyemotion 发表于 2013-8-15 14:38
wordy的原因应该是增加了she，从句和主句主语一直时，从句主语需要省略。
后面的那个for可以理解成为连词， ...

!!!!!!好！！！！

dneuies

skyemotion 发表于 2013-8-15 14:38
wordy的原因应该是增加了she，从句和主句主语一直时，从句主语需要省略。
后面的那个for可以理解成为连词， ...

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