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Jenwel

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing thins they like to do rather than doing things they should do.

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       I cannot entirely agree with thestatement that people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doingthings they like to do rather than doing things they should do. I must clarifythat things people should do sometimes is things they like to do. They are notmutually exclusive.

       Firstly, the meaning of"enjoyment" is difficult to define in this statement. Admittedly,people always love to do things they are interested in. Maybe this interest isalso an aspect of "enjoyment", because people's mentality is entertained.People who succeed in things they do are certainly enjoyed. For instance, Ilove to play basketball in weekends. I am pleased by this sport, because it canmake me feel healthy and energetic after I play it. I admit that peopleactually do things they like. It's the instinct of everyone and irrelevant withwhether they would do things they should do.

       Then I can also regard the word"enjoyment" as the superficial meaning: entertainment or recreation.People love things which can please them or provide them more enjoyment, e.g.playing cards. Many people play cards just for fun. But some of them may fallthemselves into the game even be trapped in gambling. They are definitely suchgroup of people claimed in the statement, "They do things they like to dorather than do things they should do". I mean, they play cards or gamblingevery day and quit their jobs, just like walking dead, spend too much time onpersonal enjoyment.

       Based on above analysis, I think thisstatement is unconvincing. Things we should do sometimes are also things welike to do. If we can dedicate ourselves into things we both love and need todo, we can obtain more efficient life style. For instance, if I were a coder ina software company and I love to debug these programs. Maybe I am happy everyday and I can also finish my work efficiently.

       In general, I cannot entirely agree withthe statement.

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结尾段来不及了，于是一句话结束。
哎，确实得提高点速度了。

Jenwel

哎，是不是自己写的太乱了……
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