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Spencer125

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on
her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating
them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully
coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix
Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinated them with her narratives and
答案是C，我一直搞不懂E哪里错了？？？

xiqiong

歧义~ in her book illustration...修饰Ｎ的话～　　就是ＢＰ在她的书里肿么肿么了。。。　　ＬＺ觉得呢～　　而且them实在用得好难看啊~ 一般代词都很难指代介词后面的N。 特别是，你看看哟~这个Beatrix Potter carefully
coordinated them with her narratives and 是不是主句， 那in her book illustrations。。。这个修饰是不是不算是主干内容~ 对句子起修饰，换一个说法就是可以拿掉的。 这样那them修饰什么呢~  LZ觉得呢~

enkyklios

我觉得楼主可以参考以下

http://forum.chasedream.com/foru ... &fromuid=809886

Spencer125

enkyklios 发表于 2013-7-11 18:13
我觉得楼主可以参考以下

http://forum.chasedream.com/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=862985&fromuid=809 ...

谢谢你~~~~~~~

xiqiong

enkyklios 发表于 2013-7-11 18:13
我觉得楼主可以参考以下

http://forum.chasedream.com/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=862985&fromuid=809 ...

哈哈～好帖子～我一会把你这系列看一遍全～～

Spencer125

xiqiong 发表于 2013-7-11 18:16
哈哈～好帖子～我一会把你这系列看一遍全～～

麻烦再看一题

Marconi's conception of the radio was as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation; instead, it is precisely the opposite, a tool for communicating with a large, public audience.

A. Marconi's conception of the radio was as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation; instead, it is





B. Marconi conceived of the radio as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation, but which is





C. Marconi conceived of the radio as a tool for private conversation that could substitute for the telephone; instead, it has become





D. Marconi conceived of the radio to be a tool for private conversation, a substitute for the telephone, which has become





E. Marconi conceived of the radio to be a substitute for the telephone, a tool for private conversation, other than what it is,
答案是C，可是我的问题是GMAT里面，which/that 引导定语从句，先行词不是说指他们前面的一个词吗，这里that的先行词是conversation，但题目本意是说radio代替了telephone，所以先行词应该是radio呀，这不是和GMAT的规律矛盾了吗？

xiqiong

Spencer125 发表于 2013-7-11 19:02
麻烦再看一题

Marconi's conception of the radio was as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for  ...

that和which其实可以跳跃修饰的~ 至少我做到现在，一般是这样的，要是 n+介短 +that/which 我习惯性跳到那个N 去修饰。 就是说~这里的that 应该是修饰 tool  ~  ^^ 你觉得呢~ manhattanSC里记得有说跳跃修饰的问题，你可以去看看哈~

xiqiong

Spencer125 发表于 2013-7-11 19:02
麻烦再看一题

Marconi's conception of the radio was as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for  ...

当然你也可以把as a tool 那一块看做是修饰~  跳过去咯~不过我觉得不影响理解～　

xiqiong

Spencer125 发表于 2013-7-11 19:02
麻烦再看一题

Marconi's conception of the radio was as a substitute for the telephone, a tool for  ...

http://forum.chasedream.com/thread-406482-1-1.html 看这个~

Spencer125

xiqiong 发表于 2013-7-11 19:11
http://forum.chasedream.com/thread-406482-1-1.html 看这个~

哎呀！太谢谢你了。你们都好牛呀。这么快找到了这么多资料，不慎感激呀。我压力挺大的，都考了二次了，没有考出来。