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Since 1975 so many people have been moving to Utah such that Mormons who were once 75 percent of the population are now only accounting for half of it.

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求问一个prep上有关run-on sentence的问题

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发表于 2013-7-2 23:35:33 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
Since 1975 so many people have been moving to Utah such that Mormons who were once 75 percent of the population are now only accounting for half of it.


  • so many people have been moving to Utah such that Mormons who were once 75 percent of the population are now only accounting for half of it
  • many people have been moving to Utah, so Mormons once 75 percent of the population are now accounting for only half
  • that many people have been moving to Utah, such that the Mormons that were once 75 percent of the population are now accounting for only half of it
  • many people have been moving to Utah such that the Mormons, who once represented 75 percent of the population, now only account for half
  • so many people have been moving to Utah that the Mormons, who once represented 75 percent of the population, now account for only half

4语法笔记上说是run on sentence,有两个动词。我没懂呢。。。

many people have been moving to Utah such that the Mormons, who once represented 75 percent of the population, now only account for half

我理解的account是修饰Mormons的啊,怎么就run-on了呢。。
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沙发
发表于 2013-7-3 00:14:54 | 只看该作者
many people have been moving to Utah such that the Mormons, who once represented 75 percent of the population, now only account for half
感觉应该是SUCH THAT 和前面的Utah run-on 了 ,他是说好多人搬去Utah了 然后MORMONS又怎么怎么了~~所以应该标点隔开~
板凳
发表于 2013-7-3 10:33:31 | 只看该作者
D不是RUN-ON,而是SUCH THAT这个结构的错误,还有ONLY的位置不正确影响了句意。
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-3 11:57:25 | 只看该作者
Laurielin 发表于 2013-7-3 00:14
many people have been moving to Utah such that the Mormons, who once represented 75 percent of the p ...

可是我理解的是   such many people have been moving to Utah  that the Mormons, who once represented 75 percent of the population, now only account for half   

这样不对吗?我觉得挺顺的啊。。。你说的用逗号隔开是什么意思呀~~
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-3 11:59:59 | 只看该作者
kiwifoodtown 发表于 2013-7-3 10:33
D不是RUN-ON,而是SUCH THAT这个结构的错误,还有ONLY的位置不正确影响了句意。 ...

恩恩 是有这些问题,但是语法笔记还说有run on sentence 的问题耶。。。
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发表于 2013-7-3 12:10:51 | 只看该作者
incell 发表于 2013-7-3 11:59
恩恩 是有这些问题,但是语法笔记还说有run on sentence 的问题耶。。。

没有这个问题,不用去理会。
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-3 12:31:31 | 只看该作者
kiwifoodtown 发表于 2013-7-3 12:10
没有这个问题,不用去理会。

好的 谢谢~
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