天山03-38:

爱维的天

天山03-38:
The normative model of strategic decision-making suggests that executives examine a
firm’s external environment and internal conditions, and in using the set of objective
criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide on a strategy.

A. conditions, and in using the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide
B. conditions, and they use the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses in deciding
C. conditions and, in using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, deciding
D. conditions and, using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, decide
E. conditions and, in their use of the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, they decide

答案是﹙D﹚，我选﹙B﹚
想问﹙D﹚的using是修饰何者，又﹙B﹚为什么不对?

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-1-7 10:32:38编辑过]

Shuaishuai

逼的没办法了选了D。B是不正确的，因为句子的意思decide是要和前面的examine并列做谓语。USING现在分词短语在句中做方式状语修饰decide和examine. 整个句子看起来有点饶是因为狡猾的ETS把USING短语提前了，放到句子最后就清楚了。

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-12-29 2:21:00编辑过]

westlakegz

我当时排除B是因为use to do sth.,而不是use in doing，而且B中的重心改变原句。

D挺好的啊，只是多一个插入成分让大家难理解一点。

hpp920

爱维:using短语是做方式状语修饰decide. 如果放最后面就是修饰的decide和examine

B的错误一是在于"and they..." 用法即wordy, 又有句法歧义. 二是"use in doing" unidiomatic.

而今迈步从头越

以下是引用爱维的天在2004-12-29 0:05:00的发言：

天山03-38:
The normative model of strategic decision-making suggests that executives examine a
firm’s external environment and internal conditions, and in using the set of objective
criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide on a strategy.

A. conditions, and in using the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide
B. conditions, and they use the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses in deciding
C. conditions and, in using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, deciding
D. conditions and, using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, decide
E. conditions and, in their use of the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, they decide

答案是﹙D﹚，我选﹙B﹚
想问﹙D﹚的using是修饰何者，又﹙B﹚为什么不对?

B是肯定不对的，逗号表示and they...于前面的句子， 逻辑意思不合理；如果要表达和后面的executives examine a　firm’s 。。。并列的话，不需要用这种分句来表达，而且要用that来和他并列；如果是和examine a　firm’s 。。。并列的话，则只用and联结2个动词就可以了，逗号和they都不需要。

using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, 方式状语做插入语，修饰decide

liu_9000

以下是引用westlakegz在2005-1-7 8:48:00的发言：

我当时排除B是因为use to do sth.,而不是use in doing，而且B中的重心改变原句。

D挺好的啊，只是多一个插入成分让大家难理解一点。

想说一下自己的看法(不一定对)

use sth to do sth/ use sth for doing sth 是习惯用法, 表示目的

但并不能说use sth. in doing sth. 是错的(我没有找到根据,如果说错了请大家纠正). 这里in doing sth并不是use的目的, 如果翻译成汉语,前者是: 用sth.来做...; 后者是: 做什么时用sth.

这题支持D.

audreylin100

想問

答案D

D. conditions and, using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, decide

將using 改成 in using 這樣還是對的嗎??

philipsnf

The normative model of strategic decision-making suggests that executives examine a
firm’s external environment and internal conditions, and in using the set of objective
criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide on a strategy.

A. conditions, and in using the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide （错在can decide之前没有动词可以对应，因为and连接的平行/并列结构，前后动词必须形式对称）
B. conditions, and they use the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses in deciding（错在they多余，并列结构应该省略相同的主语）
C. conditions and, in using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, deciding （和A的错误一样，deciding无对应动词形式）
D. conditions and, using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, decide（正确。and连接动词examine和decide，using分词结构做壮语）
E. conditions and, in their use of the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, they decide（和B错误一样，they多余)

z520m

我本来也选B的，现在觉得B问题挺多的。in doing sth不正确，and they繁琐，确实D来的好

顾风

examine不能和 can decide平行？　疑惑。。。