刷不到8月份考位于是报了7月份考试的新人作文求狠批

季末的风

还有一个月考试，虽然知道时间很紧，写作什么的考完研后很久没有写过了，但是还是想尽全力去努力，从OG的题目开始，刚开始有点手生，求建议求指导。

OG test 1
综合写作 about altruism

The speaker challaneged the passage'sopinions about altruism.

First,the speaker did not think thatmeerkat is the kind of mammal that is not selfish.Recently scientific researchfound that meerkats eat before sending a guard,and the guard will give an alarmnear the burrow,so that it can quickly run into the burrow.However,meerkats'such behavior will let the predator notice other small animals,which will setother species in danger.This point is opposite to the passage.

second,the speaker challenged the view thathunman often behaves unselfish by negating that induviduals who donate organsto others gains nothing.On the contrary,the speaker held the opinion that theso-called unselfish man will gain appreciation from others or the society,whichwill benifit them signaficantly.This point is also opposite to the passage.

Above all,the speaker didn't agree with thepassage.She thought both animals and humans are some kind of selfishness.

独立写作
Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible.Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a long time.Which of these situations do you think is better?Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
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I agree that young adults should beindependence from their parents as soon as possible.For those who always livewith their families,they will never grow up.Learning to live alone will benefityoung adults significantly.

First of all,not living with family membersgives freedom to them.To some extent,parents will control their children'slives.For example,my mother is some kind of old-fashioned.She always considerthe society full of dangerous.She doesn't allow me to go out at night,to travelaround the country,even doesn't allow me to watch concert.Due to Chinesetradition,I can't challenge her.Thus,when I go to university,I feel free,I cango shopping in the evening,travel around the beautiful China,enjoy Jay Chou'sconcert without telling my mother.

second,living alone facialitates youngsterslearing to economic independent.To live freely bases on economicindependence.Youngsters will have to do some part-time jobs to make money.Theymust coordinate their work and study.It will be a hard time,however,untilyoungsters know it is hard to make money,they will cherish the fortune anddon't spend money without plans.Futhermore, pehaps they will learn to make fulluse of fortune.

At last,people who live independent willgrow up quickly.They will meet some difficulties both in study and life.Withoutthe help of family,they must learn to handle them.Maybe they will experience atough time.But when they look back,they will definitely be thankful.When I goto university alone,I met numerous difficulties,sometimes I even complained andcries.But I finally get over all of them.Now,when I call back the memory,Irealize that kind of experience is irretrievable.everyone must experience toughtime sooner or later,and they have to learn to handle it,then they will growup.

I think young adults should learn to beindependent as soon as possible,so that they can enjoy a free life,gain theability to make ends meet,and finally grow up.