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发表于 2013-5-30 09:41:05 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
66.     The 32 species thatmake up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact includethe animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be
30feet long and is famous for itsaggressive hunting pods.  
(A)        include the animalknown as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is
(B)       include the animalknown as the killer whale, growing as big as 30 feet long and
(C)       include the animalknown as the killer whale, growing up to 30 feet long and being
(D)       includes the animalknown as the killer whale, which can grow as big as 30 feet long and is (A)
(E)        includes the animalknown as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and it is
answer is A.
A中and后面是否应该加which呢?
比如 80.     A report by the American Academyfor the Advancement of Science has concluded that much of thecurrently uncontrolled dioxins to which North Americans are exposed comesfrom the incineration of wastes.
(A)        much of the currentlyuncontrolled dioxins to which North Americans are exposed comes
(B)       much of the currentlyuncontrolled dioxins that North Americans are exposed to come
(C)       much of the dioxinsthat are currently uncontrolled and that North Americans are exposedto comes
(D)       many of the dioxinsthat are currently uncontrolled and North Americans are exposed to come(E)
(E)        many of the currentlyuncontrolled dioxins to which North Americans are exposed come

错误选项D其中的一个错误理由就是:
that should be repeated inin the clause "that North Americans are exposed to"


请大牛解答,谢谢。
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沙发
发表于 2013-5-30 10:12:49 | 只看该作者
从句平行固然是好啊,但是第一道题没有 两个都加 which 的选项呢 我发现that才容易平行 which 没有见过呢
板凳
发表于 2013-5-30 10:45:17 | 只看该作者
66题,and 后面不需加which, can grow to be
30feet long and is famous for itsaggressive hunting pods是平行的由which引导。

80题,请说出你的问题是什么。
地板
发表于 2013-5-30 11:03:25 | 只看该作者
我觉得

66题,不加which是因为and前后的分句,其先行词都是killer whale,所以用 the killer whale, which ... and ...

而80题,加that是因为and前后的分句,讲的是两件事情,所以用 conclude that... and that
5#
发表于 2013-5-30 13:45:01 | 只看该作者
interesting discussion!
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发表于 2013-6-4 14:16:19 | 只看该作者
1. which can grow to be 30 feet long and is
can grow和is的主语都是which(killer whale),所以后一个which可以省略。
2. A report by the American Academyfor the Advancement of Science has concluded that many of the dioxins that are currently uncontrolled and North Americans are exposed to come

D的错误首先还不是缺that,而是dioxins后面多了个that,否则conclude that后面的成分就变成了 名词 and 一个句子,这显示是不平行的。
改成A report by the American Academyfor the Advancement of Science has concluded that many of the dioxins are currently uncontrolled and North Americans are exposed to come from the incineration of wastes.这样来看结构顺了点,但语义出了问题,NA和exposure的对象(dioxins)之间的联系没了。
继续改A report by the American Academyfor the Advancement of Science has concluded that many of the dioxins currently uncontrolled to which North Americans are exposed to come from the incineration of wastes. 加入了to which,意思就对了。

这样分析下来你发现,North American之前就根本不该有that,因为它不是和前面dioxins部分平行的。

你所提及的理由“错误选项D其中的一个错误理由就是:
that should be repeated inin the clause "that North Americans are exposed to"”是不对的!
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