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titatita

大全中另一个while doing 例子

246. Joachim Raff and Giacomo Meyerbeer are examples of the kind of composer who receives popular acclaim while living, often goes into decline after death, and never regains popularity again.

(A)  often goes into decline after death, and never regains popularity again

(B)   whose reputation declines after death and never regains its status again

(C)  but whose reputation declines after death and never regains its former status

(D)  who declines in reputation after death and who never regained popularity again

(E)   then has declined in reputation after death and never regained popularity

titatita

我觉得此题a的错误是逻辑主语问题

In January 1994 an oil barge ran aground off the coast of San Juan, Puerto Rico, leaking its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean, while causing the pollution of the city’s beaches.

A) leaking its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean, while causing the pollution of

leaking的主语是an oil barge 是一艘驳船，不能主动leaking，也不能主动causing

而是驳船翻了，并漏油这件事，污染了。。。。。

逻辑意思最重要啊

coffemug

Seriously agree with titatita

GMAT阿驴

是C了  应该是这件事产生pollute

双鱼游

这个题主要强调事情的发展的先后顺序
A. leaking its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean, while causing the pollution of
原句要表达的意思是先翻船后漏油，而A的leaking表示了喝翻船同时进行，而且while的用法也不对，省略的主语是an oil barge，是船导致了污染，逻辑意思不对，正确表达应该是翻船漏油这件事造成了污染，最恰当的是用现在分词
B. with its cargo of 750000 gallons leaking into the ocean, and it polluted
一方面with的用法不对，用with的话也表示漏油和翻船同时发生，而且it 只能指代 barge，也不对

D. while it leaked its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean and caused the pollution of
while的用法和it的指代错误同上
E. so that its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, and they were polluting.
so that就错的更离谱了，还有they（复数）没有合理指代对象

wizwiz

a选项causing the pollution of 没有polluting简洁，第一个就被我排除了。。。

onion76

24楼的双鱼游童鞋评论得鞭辟入里，对双鱼侠的敬仰，滔滔江水连绵不绝。