关于og 12 sc 36的一个新疑问，之前没有讨论过哦！求NN解答~

cookiezwy

Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff, Deborah Sampson, the first woman to draw a soldier’s pension, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become too ill to serve.
(A)    22, was injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she had become
(B)    22, was injured three times, while being discharged in 1783 because she had become
(C)    22 and was injured three times, and discharged in 1783, being
(D)    22, injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she was
(E)    22, having been injured three times and discharged in 1783, being

其实就是A选项啦，前面并列的三个动词 joined。。。was injured。。。was charged， 都是过去式，而because 是用过去完成时had become， 那语法上不是发生在三个动作之前吗？
逻辑上这就不同了啊？？不懂了求NN们解答~~~~~~~~~~

kiwifoodtown

had become发生在was discharged之前，也是was discharged的原因，逻辑上很正常啊，不懂LZ疑惑些什么。

cookiezwy

had become 不会发生在 joined 和 was injured 之前吗？

kiwifoodtown

我想，句子写的很清楚：was discharged in 1783 because she had become too ill to serve，为什么你会有发生在joined 和 was injured 想法。

zxppx

楼主可能认为因为joined...was injured...and was discharged...三个部分是平行结构，所以放在最后面的because就是修饰这整个结构的吧。但是because 并没有用逗号隔开，而是直接跟在was discharged之后的，所以应该是was discharged的原因。
如果一定要理解成because是三个动作的原因，那么很明显，A,B,D逻辑意思都错了。可是C和E选项有明显问题，OG上已经解释得很清楚了。

kiwifoodtown

LS分析的很有道理，楼主可能认为谓语平行后，那么原因也都平行了。

cookiezwy

zxppx 发表于 2013-5-10 10:18
楼主可能认为因为joined...was injured...and was discharged...三个部分是平行结构，所以放在最后面的beca ...

哦哦谢啦~确实感觉没有逗号应该只是修饰最后一个动词
呵呵这题只是对那个过去完成时有点疑惑，总想着得发生在过去的过去。。

zxppx

过去完成时表示“过去的过去”并没有错。she 是因为生病，才导致她被discharged，当然是发生在之前的事情了。如果你觉得发生在“过去的过去”是说，在discharged之前就已经结束了，那么就有问题了。因为，完成时有两种含义：持续的动作，或者对持续的影响。
如果把“生病”理解成“持续的影响”，仍然可以说明为什么她会被discharged.

346268575

zxppx 发表于 2013-5-10 10:47
过去完成时表示“过去的过去”并没有错。she 是因为生病，才导致她被discharged，当然是发生在之前的事情了 ...

关于我有个问题 不是平列结构中第一个句子含有BE 或者BECOME，第二个句子中的BE或者BECOME必须省略吗。按照这样说 那不是应该是was injured three times, and discharged in 1783 because she had become

zxppx

346268575 发表于 2013-7-28 19:38
关于我有个问题 不是平列结构中第一个句子含有BE 或者BECOME，第二个句子中的BE或者BECOME必须省略吗。按 ...

是可以省略，不是必须