GwD 一道题

Spencer125

The first commerciallysuccessful drama to depict Black family life sympathetically and the first playby a Black woman to be produced on Broadway, it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the NewYork Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and was later made into both afilm and a musical.

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A.     it was Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the New York Drama Critics’ CircleAward in 1959, and was later made

B.     in 1959 A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry, won the New York DramaCritics’ Circle Award and was later made

C.     Lorraine Hansberry won the New York Drama Critics’ CircleAward for A Raisin in the Sun in1959, and it was later made

D.     Lorraine Hansberry’s ARaisin in the Sun won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959 andwas later made

E.      A Raisin in the Sun, by Lorraine Hansberry,won the New York Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959, and later made it

这道题答案是D，我们来讨论一下B吧，我个人感觉B错是因为 in 1959的位置放置在最前面是错的，因为这样就相当于修饰整个句子了，所以只有答案D正确，别的 好排除。  大家有何看法？欢饮讨论，共进步~~

bejamin1111

这一点没错。另外一个我认为是by LH这个插入语wordy

chineuro

那A为什么不对？

bejamin1111

chineuro 发表于 2013-5-5 21:42
那A为什么不对？

这是modifier的问题，The first commerciallysuccessful drama 作为modifier修饰The first commerciallysuccessful drama ，所以主句开头必须以The first commerciallysuccessful drama 开头

chineuro

bejamin1111 发表于 2013-5-5 22:14
这是modifier的问题，The first commerciallysuccessful drama 作为modifier修饰The first commerciallys ...

it 指代什么？

bejamin1111

chineuro 发表于 2013-5-5 22:22
it 指代什么？

如果单看Ａ，这里的ｉｔ无指代，是强调结构

zxppx

根据修饰成分的对象要合理，排除A,B,C， 在E选项中主语是没问题的，问题在于最后的and later made it错误，应该采用被动语态

chineuro

bejamin1111 发表于 2013-5-5 22:28
如果单看Ａ，这里的ｉｔ无指代，是强调结构

代词怎么可能无所指代？
其实这才是关键，为什么A错。it指代的是整个句子Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun that won the NewYork Drama Critics’ Circle Award in 1959，而不是Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin in the Sun，因此与前文不一致。

bejamin1111

chineuro 发表于 2013-5-5 22:37
代词怎么可能无所指代？
其实这才是关键，为什么A错。it指代的是整个句子Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin ...

open to discussion

niclively

chineuro 发表于 2013-5-5 22:37
代词怎么可能无所指代？
其实这才是关键，为什么A错。it指代的是整个句子Lorraine Hansberry’s A Raisin ...

it is ... that 是强调。。去除以后句子意思无问题无改变啊。
错在后面 逗号以后的and that要是一个句子 所以缺少主语》。。而且and that你硬要说也木有跟他平行的结构呀