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kenmingli · 发表于 2013-4-25 21:40:31

感谢各位..!

普渡哥 · 发表于 2013-4-26 10:28:51

81写得非常好。
In sum, getting more time to attend the school activities can help parents learn more from their students and build a more comfortable relation between parents and school.

learn more about更好吧

普渡哥 · 发表于 2013-4-26 10:31:10

139 is very good. I like the way you write the issues.

kenmingli · 发表于 2013-4-26 20:11:13

普渡哥发表于 2013-4-26 10:31
139 is very good. I like the way you write the issues.

谢谢普渡哥! 对我是莫大的鼓励.!

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