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今天cookie第一次加入写作小分队~之前在阅读小分队晃荡过一直觉得小分队是一个爱与鼓励的大团体，会给予每个人前进的动力和指引~~

加入小分队不仅是为了考试，更是想加强自己的英语水平，拓宽知识面，向native人士不断靠拢，这样才有底气在国外生存学习！

总之来到这里就是缘分，我还只是个小菜鸟，希望大NN们多提点，也希望和各方好友共同进步啊~~

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cookiezwy

4.18
Independent writing
Some people, when consider about travelling, always pop out the first thought that where should they go and then what
food they can bring. However, it seems to that who will accompany you during the trip is the most important thing i will
think about,--that is to say, to contribute to a happy journey, i will select good friends first.

The main reason of it is that there are far less conflicts to reconcile between good friends than otherwise. Good friends are formed
based on a long period of talking, sharing thoughts and understanding each other gradually, therefore they know each other
well and somewhat share similar interests and value. However, if you travel with a person you are not so familiar with, different
opinion will frequently appear during the vacation, such as the route of visiting scene spot, when to get up and transportation
you choose to take. A enjoyable vacation requires minimized dispute, so i will first select a good friend to go with.

What's more, good friends are ones you can rely on. Most places you are going to visit is strange to you, so you had better
go there with a well-acquitance. If there is any emergence, you can consult with him or her or at least calm down a little
bit. While imagine that you are along, you will face a lot of potential problem: if put it small, it may be that you lost your purse and
cannot even go home; if put it seriously, it may be that you are injured in an accident, needing someone to take care of you.
And if there is a good friend with you, the trip will be more secure and thus more joyful. As a result, i will choose a good friend to go with.

Last, travelling with a good friends provide opportunity for them to experience good time together and share happy memory, thereby strenthening
the relationship. Friendship needs care and time to protect, cultivate and pomote, but we always complain that chance is limited for friends and us
to further and thoroughly know each other. Therefore, selecting a good friend and go for a vacation is just a excellent choice, and i would
like to make use of the precious spare time to get along with my friends.

To sum up, i will put a good friend to go with during a vacation as my priority, since the journey shared with him or her
has less conflicts, more security and benefits for our friendship. As for the destination or food to take, those
are secondary things to consider and can be decided together with my good friend.
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cookiezwy

4.18
Integrated writing
The passage maintains that the portrait of the woman is not authored by Rembrandt. It claims three reasons. However, a recent study concludes that the paint is indeed created by Rembrandt by responding to the three problems presented in the passage.

First, the author of the passage claims that there is something wrong with the way the woman is dressed: she wears a linen cap that was only wore by servants but also wears a lxurious fur collar beyond her pruchasing power. However, the speaker defends that the original piece does not contain the fur collar, which was added 100 years later to raise the value of the paint.

Secondly,  the passage suggests that light and shadow do not fit together in the portrait of the woman. As a response, the speaker explains that this is because of the later adding of the fur collar. Without the extra dark fur collar, the light on the woman's face is properly illuminated. Thus the paint is actually authored by Rembrandt.

Thirdly, the text alleges that the paint is not a work of Rembrandt because the panel was made of glued wood, while Rembrandt never painted in this way. However, the speaker opposes that idea by contending that it is also a result of extra adding of fur collar 100 years later. To increase the value of it, the wood painting the collar was glued to the original paint. And interestingly, this piece of extra wood was actually from the same tree whose wood was used by Rembrandt to create a portrait of his own.

According to the three explainations offered in the lisenting part, the speaker refutes the idea presented in the passage and strongly support that the portrait of the woman is a work of Rembrandt.

叮叮西

4.18
Independent writing
Some people, when consider about travelling, always pop out the first thought that where should they go and then what
food they can bring. However, it seems to that be people who will accompany you during the trip is the most important thing i will
think about,--that is to say, to contribute to a happy journey, i will select good friends first.

The main reason of it is that there are far less conflicts to reconcile between good friends than and otherwise. Good friends are formed
based on a long period of talking, sharing thoughts and understanding each other gradually, therefore they know each other
well and somewhat share similar interests and value. However, if you travel with a person you are not so familiar with, different
opinion will frequently appear during the vacation, such as the route of visiting scene spot, when to get up and transportation
you choose to take. A enjoyable vacation requires minimized dispute, so i will first select a good friend to go with.

What's more, good friends are ones you can rely on. Most places you are going to visit is are strange to you, so you had better
go there with a well-acquitance. If there is any emergence, you can consult with him or her or at least calm down a little
bit with the company of your friends. While imagine that you are along, you will face a lot of potential problems: if put it small 换一个词, it may be that you lost loss your purse and
cannot even go home; if put it seriously, it may be that you are injured in an accident, needing someone to take care of you.
And if there is a good friend with you, the trip will be more secure and thus more joyful. As a result, i will choose a good friend to go with.

Last, travelling with a good friends provide opportunity for them travelors to experience good time together and share happy memory, thereby strenthening
the relationship. Friendship needs care and time to be protected, cultivated and pomote promoted, but we always complain that chance is limited for friends and us
to further and thoroughly know each other. Therefore, selecting a good friend and go for a vacation is just a excellent choice, and i would
like to make use of the precious spare time to get along with my friends.

To sum up, i will put a good friend to go with during a vacation as my priority, since the journey shared with him or her
has less conflicts, more security and benefits for our friendship. As for the destination or food to take, those
are secondary things to be considered and can be decided together with my good friend.
整体写的很好，结构和给出的理由都很好