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Rich as the teacher attacked, the issue that whether the teacher is respected as much as before has been heatedly discussed. Some people constantly think that the teacher, as usual, is respected. But, in my own perspective, this is not the same as a few years age. It has been changed with the time going. It is true that the teacher does not acquire much respect than before. Several points in different dimension will be demonstrated and explained to testify my hypothesis.

First and foremost, the public idea of the teacher has been changed. Several years ago, teachers were viewed as made great contribution to humanity, but recently they are regarded as just finish their own work. Just as so many occupations as well, it is a job without difference from others.以前教师对人类社会有很多贡献，而现在他们只是完成自己的工作，所以跟其他工作没有区别了？那么以前的教师除了完成本质工作还在哪些方面有贡献？ Viewing from this point, it is necessary for outstanding do their work rather than to set them as an example. Without necessary, just because they are engaged in professional and overly adore them.逻辑…… So it is quite natural that the teacher has not acquired much respect and admire than before.

Besides, the people of the teachers which the bad and the good are intermingled, some of the bad(worst) one influence the image of teachers. With the development of international era, this bad effect once built, it will be enlarged and flowed and finally cause irreparable consequence. Taking a famous matter as an example, Guo Meimei, which is also called Guo Paopao. The teacher was escaping between Wen Chuan earthquake and ignoring the life of his students. After the earthquake his was be condemned by the whole society since he has the obligation to protect his students' life when face dangerous. However, one of his words made us surprised again. He said, the only person who I would save when she being dangerous is my daughter, in addition, on one worth me do. Because one of extremely example cause bad image and the teacher is no longer as respectful as before.以偏概全的逻辑问题

Last but not least, one of the important reasons is that the teacher was not as rich as before knowledge？. They are focusing on earning money, opening classes and so on. Taking fewer and fewer energy on academic, so the teacher without extraordinary knowledge is naturally cannot win numerous prides. Walking on the street, you can see every kinds of cram school on every corner. This behavior which taking them a large amount of benefits as well as damaging their reputation.

In conclusion, taken all the factors into accounts, I think teacher cannot receive much respect as usual is natural because public are changing their old idea, the bad behavior of the teacher hiding in the whole teacher, teachers’ ability of knowledge is falling.

个人拙见：1. 强化语法 2. 写作初期用模板 3. 多看范文 4. 用论据证明论点时的逻辑应该一环扣一环，没有断链 5. 行文时用英语的语言思考，而不是用中文思考再翻译成英文，这样可以杜绝中式英文
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