求大神批改啊。TPO1，5月18号考试了。。。

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The sports and social activities are as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support As we know,more and more universities and colleges invest more money on classes and libraries in order to trigger their students to obtain academic achievements. However, I believe that sports and social activities are also of great importance for development of students and should receive equal financial support.There are three conspicuous reasons for my opinion.First,no one have desire to hire a nerd to be the employee working for the company.The development of other personalities is obviously vital for us to become a more competitive person.Doing sports and social activities are ways to help us mode the characteristics and cultivate various abilities.The capabilities of communication,co-operation and organization can be highly developed during social activity such as holding a party and doing sports like playing football.Beside,we can exercise our minds through indulgence in certain kinds of sports such as playing chess which triggers us to think more and question us about every step other than reading books in the libraries. Furthermore,sports and social activities are essential for us to become  more healthy human beings.More specifical,they provide us the opportunities to develop our mental and physical health but not academic knowledge.How can we obtain more energy to studying in class or reviewing in the libraries.The answer is exercise,doing sports.Only by doing sports can we be stronger and resistant to illness.And how can we get along with friends and other people ,practice the most indispensable factors of being successful--the EQ?The key is to attend the social activities.One way for school to inspire students to participate in these activities is concentrating on them and investing equal financial support to provide more facilities and equipments to appeal students to get involved in them. Last but not the least,universities and colleges should consider sports and social activities as a vital aspect for the development of school itself.On one hand,adding more facilities can raise the reputation of university and gain more fund to develop other equipment such as music center.On the other hand,providing the chance to do sports and social activities will attract more top students in various aspects such as sports and art students to be interested in school which is so important for schools diversify the abilities . It is undeniable the functions  of classes and libraries are so necessary for students .However,the importances of the sports and social activities cannot be replaced.Not only can they help students to form a better traits, but also benefit students' mental and physical health.Additionally,improving the sports and social activities can also foster capabilities of schools.Hence,they are as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.