请教一个Manhatten SC 修饰部分的题

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Manhatten SC 修饰部分

The patient's rare disease was treated using novel techniques developed at the medical school.
原书建议修改为  ... through the use of novel techniques developed at the medical school

请教一下各位大虾，是否可以修改成  ... by using novel techniques...  ?

谢谢！