还有三天就上战场了，请高人指点！！！！！万分感谢！！！

xincanyouji

When it comes to the question as to the answer which country would you like to visit when you have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks, people are likely to provide various responses, such as France and Germany. As far as I am concerned, I would like to visit the United States of America. In the following paragraphs, I will justify my preference as follows.

To begin with, the United States is well known as its numerous famous universities throughout the world. In other word, I can visit these universities, which have great reputation so that I can improve my own quality. For instance, when I visit Harvard University, I have the chance to choose an American history class that I like very much to attend and listen carefully to the professor. After the class, I also can discuss some questions with the professor, which I cannot understand well. In this way, I would obtain a lot of useful information from the trip so that I can enhance my American history knowledge and my comprehensive quality.

Furthermore, the United States is a country that has a lot of different cultures. Namely, the United Sates is a multi-ethnic country; therefore, it must have various cultures such as Spanish culture and African culture, which we can enjoy. ………………..

In addition, the United States is not only a multi-cultural country, but also a “recreation center” in the whole world. If I can visit the States, I will go to some amusement place, such as a movie theatre and a stadium where I can play sports games in it. On the one hand, I can reduce my psychological pressure to the minimum level when I watch the movie that I choose. On the other hand, I efficiently avoid medical problems and improve my physical conditions by playing sports games during the two weeks. Both of these clearly indicated that the United States worth visiting.

In retrospect, as suggested by the three previous reasons, the United States is such a wonderful country that worth visiting. Therefore, if I have the opportunity to visit a foreign country, I will choose it as my first choice.

furthermore那一段，实在是想不出什么理由好些了，各位斑竹，各位同志们，麻烦帮忙啊！！多谢了！！希望明天能够看到恢复！

xincanyouji

给为帮忙看看呀，为什么没有人恢复呢！！自己限定!谢谢了，那位高人帮忙指点一下呀！？？

Veronica_Melody

When it comes to the question as to the answer which country would you like to visit when you have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks, people are likely to provide various responses, such as France and (or) Germany. As far as I am concerned, I would like to visit the United States of America. In the following paragraphs, I will justify my preference as follows.

To begin with, the United States is well known as its numerous famous universities throughout (in)the world. In other word (words), I can visit these (famous, well-known) universities, which have great reputation (reputations) so that I can improve my own quality (??quality?? word choices). For instance, when I visit Harvard University, I (would) have the chance (opportunity) to choose an American history class that I like very much to attend and listen carefully to the professor. After the class, I also can discuss some questions with the professor, which I cannot understand well. In this way, I would obtain a lot of useful information from the trip so that I can enhance my American history knowledge and my comprehensive quality.

Furthermore, the United States is a country that has a lot of different (diversity??) cultures. Namely, the United Sates is a multi-ethnic country; therefore, it must have various cultures such as Spanish culture and African culture, which we can enjoy. ………………..(this is weak point, hard to develop)

In addition, the United States is not only a multi-cultural country, (you do not have to mention this again, since you talked in the previous paragraph already) but also a “recreation center” in the whole world. If I can visit the States, I will go to some amusement place (places), such as a movie theatre and (or) a stadium where I can play sports games (sport games) in it (“it” is redundant) . On the one hand, I can reduce my psychological pressure to the minimum level when I watch the movie that I choose. (This does not show the specialty. Because you can relax at any movie theatres. A weak point) On the other hand, (you shouldn’t use “on the other hand” back to back) I efficiently avoid medical problems and improve my physical conditions by playing sports games during the two weeks. Both of these (?? “these is very vague) clearly indicated that the United States (is) worth visiting.

In retrospect, as suggested by the three previous reasons, the United States is such a wonderful country that worth visiting. Therefore, if I have the opportunity to visit a foreign country, I will choose it as my first choice.

hncsxj

以下是引用xincanyouji在2004-12-4 13:43:00的发言：

When it comes to the question as to the answer which country would you like to visit when you have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks, people are likely to provide various responses, such as France and Germany. As far as I am concerned, I would like to visit the United States of America. In the following paragraphs, I will justify my preference as follows.

To begin with, the United States is well known as its numerous famous universities throughout the world. In other wordS, I can visit these universities, which have great reputation so that I can improve my own qualityKNOWLEDGE, SKILLS AND ABILITIES. For instance, when I visit Harvard University, I have the chance to choose an American history class that I like very much to attend and listen carefully to the professor. After the class, I also can discuss some questions with the professor, which I cannot understand well. In this way, I would obtain a lot of useful information from the trip so that I can enhance my American history knowledge and my comprehensive quality.

Furthermore, the United States is a country that has a lot of different cultures. Namely, the United Sates is a multi-ethnic country; therefore, it must have HAS various cultures such as Spanish culture and African culture, which we can enjoy ENLARGE OUR SPHERE. ………………..

In addition, the United States is not only a multi-cultural country, but also a “recreation center” in the whole world. If I can visit the States, I will go to some amusement place, such as a movie theatre and a stadium where I can play sports games in it. On the one hand, I can reduce my psychological pressure to the minimum level when I watch the movie that I choose. On the other hand, I efficiently avoid medical problems and improve my physical conditions by playing sports games during the two weeks. BothALL of these clearly indicated that the United States IS worth visiting.

In retrospect, as suggested by the three previous reasons, the United States is such a wonderful country that worth visiting. Therefore, if I have the opportunity to visit a foreign country, I will choose it as my first choice.

furthermore那一段，实在是想不出什么理由好些了，各位斑竹，各位同志们，麻烦帮忙啊！！多谢了！！希望明天能够看到恢复！

写的丰富。考试时注意时间。思路可以开阔些。比如，你为何不假设你是外国人，访问中国？这样要熟悉些。理由，可以考虑几个大的方面：人文，自然景观，历史，文化，购物，教育，政治制度，传说....小的方面，还有自己想去工作，做生意，考察市场，见网友HNCSXJ，学功夫，学语言，移民去中国...

xincanyouji

多谢二位斑竹！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！谢中国我已开始是这么想的，但是后来想，自己是中国人去考试，考官应该知道吧，还能写中国吗？？？

furthermore那段这么些可以吗？还有，enlarge our sphere是啥意思呢？不太明白？？

Furthermore, the United States is a country that has a lot of different cultures. Namely, the United Sates is a multi-ethnic country; therefore, it has various cultures such as Spanish culture and Native Indian culture, which we can enlarge our sphere. For example, when I am in the United State, I would have the opportunity to visit the place that Native American Indian live so that I can see the amazing houses that they built or I can enjoy the beautiful and useful potteries they made. If I am lucky enough, I will have the chance to make the pottery myself. In this way, I would enjoy diverse cultures, which are quite different from my own culture sufficiently.

likui

enlarge our sphere,

sphere是区域，这里可以理解成【眼界】的意思。

xincanyouji

duo xie kui kui!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!