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Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and
composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the
stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and
Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from
the mainstream jazz repertory.
?? (A) Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and
composer, produced a body of work both rooted
?? (B) Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer,
produced a body of work that was rooted both
???? (C) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who
produced a body of work rooted
???? (D) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk
produced a body of work that was rooted
?? (E) Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk
produced a body of work rooted both
为啥both很多余
b 很wordy啊  很多题目不都这么介绍人的吗
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kwok1123

the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington，这里其实只是一种tradition，如果是两种tradition的话，Duke Ellingto前面，and后面应该会有that of. 而且就算有that of， both的位置也不对，应该在 in 后面才平行。

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bejamin1111

这里凡是有both的选项都错误；
TM produced a body of work rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington；注意这里rooted的宾语只是tradition这一个核心词，一个对象，何谈both..and的平行；这里的平行只是Willie Smith and Duke Ellington这两个人的简单平行