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melodyaza

do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
In twenty years there will not be fewer cars in use than there are today.




After the second industry revolution, technology is developing at the speed like a rocket. Car is one of  its products. It brings us many benefits, but also causes some problems like pollution and accidents. However, as far as I am concerned, in twenty years there will not be fewer cars in use than there are today.
First of all, the  for cars are still increasing at a stable rate. According to a research on car making companies, the number of their products keeps at a increasing rate, which means that the cars sold on the market won't decline. And at this trend, the cars in use will be more and more than there are today.
Secondly, more and more people are enjoying self-driving today, which means the cars in use will be booming. Here is a case, 50% of my parents' friends buy cars this year for self- driving, which increase twice compared to last year. And it seems that there will be more people to buy cars next year. So the costumers need is the biggest power for the market.
Thirdly, it is well known that cars are benefical and convenient in our life.
Thirdly, even though the cars have caused a lot of problems, the government also come up with solutions.
For example, clean energy is applying into cars, like hydrogen, solar energy. They have already been taken into use in some cities. Besides, more laws on road are been revised which can improve road condition a lot. Therefore, the worry for cars' problem is solved.
In sum, as the production and needs for cars are increasing, and the disadvantages are removed, there is no reason for people not to buy cars. As a result, in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

melodyaza

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After the second industry revolution, technology is developing at the speed like a rocket. Car is one of  its products. It brings us many benefits, but also causes some problems like pollution and accidents. However, as far as I am concerned, in twenty years there will not be fewer cars in use than there are today.
First of all, the  for cars are still increasing at a stable rate. According to a research on car making companies, the number of their products keeps at a increasing rate, which means that the cars sold on the market won't decline. And at this trend, the cars in use will be more and more than there are today.
Secondly, more and more people are enjoying self-driving today, which means the cars in use will be booming. Here is a case, 50% of my parents' friends buy cars this year for self- driving, which increase twice compared to last year. And it seems that there will be more people to buy cars next year. So the costumers need is the biggest power for the market.
Thirdly, it is well known that cars are beneficial and convenient in our life. This is also the reason why it was invented. It saves us time and shorts the distance between our friends and relatives. Obviously, it function is still work well today. And with the life level improving, the function of the car will play a more important role in future life.
Finally, even though the cars have caused a lot of problems, the government also come up with solutions. For example, clean energy is applying into cars, like hydrogen, solar energy. They have already been taken into use in some cities. Besides, more laws on road are been revised which can improve road condition a lot. Therefore, the worry for cars' problem is solved.
In sum, as the production and needs for cars are increasing, and the disadvantages are removed, there is no reason for people not to buy cars. As a result, in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today