句尾ing的一道题，我觉得有歧义。

sisichen666

我类个去啊。。。这样子的一般来讲，简单说svo，ving——ving一是做伴随状语，一是做结果状语，一是对主语进行信息补充;svo，ved——ved绝对是修饰o，除非是主系表结构s=o，修饰谁都行；这道题的结构是svo，which vo，ving——which即使是定语修饰，但从句也是句子，要求的是ving修饰的是邻近的句子（主句从句都可以），而不是ving必须修饰邻近的主句，所以如果我给你写成svo，which vo，ving——ving修饰从句，是米有问题的。。。。LZ亲这样可以理解了不？？

honghegu

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honghegu

找到了：http://www.beatthegmat.com/modifier-issue-expert-t87486.html

in the two choices (d) and (e), "applying..." shouldn't be a modifier at all,
because it doesn't actually *modify* anything in the preceding clause -- it gives another, separate aspect of the programs.
number one, the families can move into new housing;
number two, the families can apply part of the rent to a later purchase. these are different things.
so there's really no sense in nitpicking over what it can or can't modify, because it shouldn't be a modifier at all.

also, bear in mind that there is some flexibility here -- if a comma + -ING modifier follows a complex expression that has more than one subject+verb pair, then you may have to use a certain amount of common sense to distinguish what is modified.the modifier still must modify the same rules, but could refer to either of the subject/verb combinations.
e.g.i carried a bag containing six incubators that enclosed baby chicks, supporting them with nutrients and heat.here, the comma -ing modifier modifies only the second subject+verb pair. shown in color:i carried a bag containing six incubators that enclosed baby chicks, supporting them with nutrients and heat.VS.i dropped a bag containing six incubators that enclosed baby chicks, breaking two of them and endangering the chicks' lives.here, the comma -ing modifier modifies the entire preceding clause. shown in color:i dropped a bag (containing six incubators that enclosed baby chicks), breaking two of them and endangering the chicks' lives.

stellalights

太理解了！茅塞顿开的赶脚真好。。。谢谢谢谢~~~~

hopscotch123

sisichen666 发表于 2013-2-27 15:48
我类个去啊。。。这样子的一般来讲，简单说svo，ving——ving一是做伴随状语，一是做结果状语，一是对主语 ...

你好。这种有两套svo的一般 v-ing都是就近修饰前面的从句的吗？

daisysnail

个人感觉which...是插入语，去掉后就是...weather slowing...，slowing...修饰weather

曹元成

honghegu 发表于 2013-2-27 21:52
找到了：http://www.beatthegmat.com/modifier-issue-expert-t87486.htmlin the two choices (d) and (e),  ...

非常感谢！

kluivert

stellalights 发表于 2013-2-27 15:25
按照你重新写的句子我觉得是没问题，可是不改写的话句子主语不是weather啊，ing做状语应该不是修饰邻近吧， ...

上面解释一点问题没有
，slowing是在修饰整个clause  ---  the weather was colder and wetter than usual in some regions
简单点说就是（the weather was colder and wetter than usual in some regions）减缓了barbecue grills and lawn furniture的销售

翻译过来就 ： 一些地区的异常湿冷的天气造成xxx销售不佳

kluivert

关于Ved,Ving修饰...gmatclub上总结的几小点：

1. When verb-ing modifier is separated from the clause using a comma, then this modifier modifies the preceding clause.
2. When verb-ing modifier is not separated from the clause using a comma, then it modifies the preceding noun.
3. When verb-ing modifier is placed in the beginning of the sentence followed by a comma, then it may modify either the subject of the clause or the entire clause, depending upon the context of the sentence.
4. Verb-ed modifier modifies the preceding noun or the noun phrase.
5. When verb-ed modifier is placed in the beginning of the clause followed by a comma, then it modifies the subject of the clause.

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