Issue 81望各位狠拍

kekele007

All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

Observable as a tendency of our society is a growing appreciation of the importance of children’s education. I agree, generally, with the recommendation, in which parents are required to spare their time on their children’s school. Schools, not strictly imply the orthodox ones but including the institutions where students are able to acquire skill such as piano, painting, gymnastics and etc. In short, parents should try their best to foster children. Thus, volunteering time to children’s schools, to this extent, has a considerable meaning.

For one thing, school teachers can hardly have enough time to pay attention to each student. As a consequence, teachers may fail to take into account some students’ metal or academic problem. To compensate teachers’ fault, parents ought to help their children with their omitted issues. If adults take liberties with children’s minute problems, situation may be degeneration then out of control hereafter. So in order to guarantee children get enough attention, parents should participate in their children’s school.

Furthermore, parents are the children’s first tutors. Basic to children growing up healthy and sound is parents’ affection. Michele Flournoy, the former Under Secretary of Defense for Policy of the United States, was at the time the highest-ranking woman to hold a post at the Pentagon in the facility’s history. While the great woman just resigned from the position because of companying her children. Mrs. Flournoy’s subordination of success of career to companying children relates the significance to volunteer time to children’s school. Another instance, Lin Changmin, a famous politician and diplomatist, concerned himself with his daughter’s education considerably. When he studied in Europe
he even brought his daughter with him. His daughter, Lin Huiyin, became a eminent poet and architect. She was a pioneer of Chinese architecture. Her notable achievement incontestably related to her father’s volunteering time to her education in her childhood. Hence, children’s excellences have less to do with merely school lessons than it do with parents’ effort.
In contrast, find children’s interests and potential will be a tough task if parents do not participate in their children’s schools. Let alone giving appropriate guide. What’s worse, children will be rebellious when they step in adolescence, which leaves parents vexations about outside lure for adolescents. Students’ school preferences can partly inform their parents of their situation.

However, sharing time on children’s schools will inevitably maraud parents’ time and energy which may hamper parents pursuing success in their careers. Yet, it is a bias that parents emphasize career over children. I have heard a couple, who both outstood in their careers whereas their son became a criminal because of lacking parents’ concern. The couple regretted didn’t spare enough time and attention on their child but they didn’t have another chance. Obviously, children’s prospect is more important than parents’ career. For parents, volunteer time to children’s schools is essential.

Another specific circumstance is that some parents can not be able to help their children’s schoolwork considering their limited capacity. An alternative method of them is asking special institutions for help. They are also required to volunteer time to accompanying children except for their homework.


不明白为什么字体会不同，好奇怪啊。
希望大家从各方面狠拍，逻辑语法到遣词造句。辛苦了~~

竹林中人

growing up healthy and sound
倒数第二段感觉有点混乱，意思不很明确，一方面是觉得会浪费父母的时间，一方面觉得又很有必要，then 父母们该怎么做

kekele007

想表达的是孩子的教育比父母的事业成功更重要。  应该怎么改比较好？

竹林中人

想表达的是孩子的教育比父母的事业成功更重要。  应该怎么改比较好？

-- by 会员 kekele007 (2013/2/26 22:07:58)

考虑到父母的具体情况，有时候很难抽出足够多的时间在孩子的学校教育上，这个时候就需要委托其他人或者其他的办法了。

kekele007

。。。。。今天看了OG发现这篇完全跑题了，没有specific circumstance