OG 13 SC 104 跪求解答

ddairy199

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

想请教各方NN，我看了千行，千行上说carefully coordinating...修饰SVO，因而不合逻辑，那B选项中的carefully coordinating...能不能单独修饰BP？放在句首的v-ing不是既可以修饰S,也可以修饰SVO吗？
所以B选项为什么不选呢？
谢谢！！！

DUKB24

可以

但是要比较


若按LZ所说


ving修饰的是svo，那么in这个部分在句中的关系是什么？是被ving修饰？还是作为总起修饰全句？还是其他？


C选项的which的话就限定了只有一种做noun modifier的可能，所以就不存在所谓的歧义了

ddairy199

哦~懂了！多谢版主！！！

蓝精灵的蓝

ddairy199 发表于 2013-2-11 21:02
哦~懂了！多谢版主！！！

ing的话，in her illustration做状语，THEM就无所指代了

kiwifoodtown

蓝精灵的蓝 发表于 2013-4-22 22:24
ing的话，in her illustration做状语，THEM就无所指代了

你的回答很精妙。

ddairy199

蓝精灵的蓝 发表于 2013-4-22 22:24
ing的话，in her illustration做状语，THEM就无所指代了

豁然开朗!谢谢!

lsvic1623

蓝精灵的蓝 发表于 2013-4-22 22:24
ing的话，in her illustration做状语，THEM就无所指代了

想问问牛牛e为什么错了？coordinated和capitalized动词并列不行吗？

ARG

非常感谢

dennis2k

lsvic1623 发表于 2013-6-7 18:23
想问问牛牛e为什么错了？coordinated和capitalized动词并列不行吗？

同问！求解

纸飞机32

dennis2k 发表于 2014-2-4 15:40
同问！求解

如果是动词并列，那them指代什么呢，illustrations吗？这样句义就不通了啊。一般这种多重修饰的句子，就是要尽量避免修饰混乱，选择一个歧义最少，句子最简洁通顺的。