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Frankly, as a parent, I disagree withthe point that children can make choice by their own. Who can make the choicefor the children, it is depend on different situations.（建议用background+你的观点的写法，比如nowadays…… Iargue …..）

Firstly, everyone knows almost allchildren have little self-control ability, so they cannot always focus on thething they should do, such as learning knowledge and exercise body. If In fact, they preferpaling games, watching TV, and browsing internet for a very long time. Thesethings not only damage their eye sight, but also teach them less knowledgewaste their numerous invaluable time(观点不太好关键不太符合逻辑啊), especially nowadaysincreasingly shameful pornography wreaking havoc in the Internet even badly thesewill lazy ruin children’s brainand body.  When I was young, I got my opiceye because of watching too much TV every day, and I find my son also likewatching TV, so I cannot let the my opic eye happen to my son. The bad habitwastes their time to do better thing, so what they need to do and when theyshould do cannot be chosen only by their own.

Secondly, as an adult, we have not only successfulmore experience aboutlife and work, but also valuable lesson to share with them. For example, when Iwas young, learning an instrument as an amateur is impossible thing in ourcountryside. So I encourage my son to learn violin, and in fact he is reallygood at this. However, for so young child, he does not like to practice violin everyday. What I do every day is to accompanywith him to exercise violin, encourage him to persist, and avoid him giving up.In this learning process, parents choose the better thing for the children’sfuture.

Thirdly, preparing enough instead ofexcessive time, money and energy for the children’s future is theresponsibility of every parent. By balancing work and life time, each parentcan offer enough time to carefully determining future things of children. Thesethings include long-term plans and short-term projects. For instance, a healthbody is necessary for the future success, and this is useful long-term plan.How to approach this goal? We need to take many short-term projects. Forexample, my son take the soccer course when the beginning of each school year,then participate the baseball exercise in the middle of that school year, andfinally in the end of the school year he  practice basketball in histeam. All the sports happen on the weekend days and keep only one hour. From theseexercise, I hope he can familiar with some major sports, maybe not as professionalas an athlete, and build a healthy and strong body for the wonderful future.

From my point, parents should spend muchtime in determining children’s future. Parents use this time to help and assisttheir children to get some achievement in future. It is not only the success ofthe children, but also the parents. I also want to claim that parents could notdetermine the future only by themselves, because children’s future depends on alot of aspects. As a parent, we should show them good way and prevent them from heading for going tothe bad way wrong orientation.

实在抱歉，回的太晚了！以为没人改我的了。

建议我已经回复你了，总之，好好加油，多加练习吧！！！