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twe133-hncsxj 六小时后开考求修改

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发表于 2004-11-17 00:43:00 | 只看该作者

twe133-hncsxj 六小时后开考求修改

133 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the most important years of a person's life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There has been a controversy over whether a person's childhood years are the most significant period in one's life. Some people believe that children develop their personalities and acquire much of knowledge in this stage and therefore it is paramount significant. On the contrary, others deem that most people generally get their professional education after they are 18 years old so that this post period is more important. As far as I am concerned, I strongly support the former for the following reasons.



To begin with, in the first twelve years, children get the most basic skills and competencies, which are necessary in their future life. Therefore, this stage is the cornerstone of their future's success. For instance, modern education theory indicates that three of every four kids have learned to speak simple words before they are eight months old. Further more, those kids brought up by wolves, which are often heard in stories, cannot speak human language clearly even they go back to our society. Not living with people in the most important years prevents them from further development as a common person.



Next, the other people's impacts have had on children's personalities, in general, are deniable. Children have very strong desires to imitate other people's behaviors and characteristics, including  patience, diligence, confidence and the way to deal with conflicts. All these attributes play crucial roles in children's later life. It is not uncommon that some wisdom seniors can predict a child's future.



Admittedly, other stages are also very important to a person. However, the role of the first twelve years of a child is more significant. It always the key determinant of a child's later behaviors.



To sum up, a person's children years are the more important than any other years. It is in this stage that a child begins to learn the basic skills and knowledge, and further, gradually his or her personalities.

沙发
发表于 2004-11-17 01:05:00 | 只看该作者

马上就要考试了,不要把自己弄得那么紧张.不要写也不要再改了.

对于语言考试,关键就在放松,放松,再放松.你没有发现吗,在睡觉前迷迷糊糊地听英语时,英语象母语一样清晰动听.

注:母语=母亲唱的摇篮曲

考了好成绩要回来象大家汇报喔!

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2004-11-17 01:14:00 | 只看该作者
可是我好像键盘不太熟...30分钟内,有8-9个word就可以检查出来的弱智错误
地板
发表于 2004-11-17 01:41:00 | 只看该作者

这个就没有办法了,只有自己多小心.不过个别明显的TYPO不会有太大影响.只要不会让人迷惑到不知道这个词到底是什么.

本想推荐你用笔写,但是根据你的风格来看,还是键盘更合适一些.因为你模板应用较熟练,所以在某处卡壳时可以写把文章的骨架搭出来,在搭骨架的同时可以想句子的结构,表达方式等.这样键盘输入就有优点了,因为插入,复制,粘贴都很方便.

当然,关键还是要用自己平时最适应的方式来.不用紧张,你要能保证写出贴在这里的文章的水平,6分我不敢说(碰到个把BT的可能性还是有的,或者是阅圈人头天晚上被老婆骂了), 5.5是绝对有的.

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