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As its sales of computer products have surpassed those of measuring instruments, the company has become increasingly willing to compete for the mass market sales they would in the past have conceded to rivals.

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请教OG12第7题,关于C的被动

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发表于 2012-12-8 22:11:29 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
As its sales of computer products have surpassed those of measuring instruments, the company has become increasingly willing to compete for the mass market sales“ they would in the past have conceded to rivals”.

(A) they would in the past have conceded to rivals
(B) they would have conceded previously to their rivals
(C) that in the past would have been conceded previously to rivals
(D) it previously would have conceded to rivals in the past
(E) it would in the past have conceded to rivals


OG解释说C的被动不好,如果C改成这样我怎么感觉被动挺好的:
As its sales of computer products have surpassed those of measuring instruments, the company has become increasingly willing to compete for the mass market sales that  would in the past have been conceded to rivals。

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沙发
发表于 2012-12-9 13:48:59 | 只看该作者
但问题不是那样的在现有的选项里有更好的 就选更好的
不用考虑怎么改得更好
板凳
发表于 2012-12-9 14:12:17 | 只看该作者
LS说的有对~
LZ不要考虑怎么改选项,应该考虑选项哪里错了
关于被动和主动语态,如果动作发出者很明确的,还是用主动语态比较好。
被动语态优选适用于动作发出者是anyone或者主语指代容易有歧义的情况

有其他明显错误的时候不要用时态作为标准判断哪个选项对那个选项错

C里面previously与in the past显然是redundancy
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