问一个平行对称问题···

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A leading figure in the Scottish enlightenment, Adam Smith's two major books are to democratic capitalism what Marx's Das Kapital is to socialism.

A.Adam Smith's two major books are to democratic capitalism what

B.Adam Smith's two major books are to democratic capitalism like

C.Adam Smith's two major books are to democratic capitalism just as

D.Adam Smith wrote two major books that are to democratic capitalism similar to(E)

E.Adam Smith wrote two major books that are to democratic capitalism what
这题选的E，因为a leading figure只能是adam smith，但是这里有个问题，未划线部分出现了 Marx's Das Kapital is to socialism，前边不是应该用Adam Smith's two major books are to democratic capitalism 更加平行对称吗？  这是不是传说中的相对错误和绝对错误的问题？？？

MiaZhang

这个题还是应该注意同位语的问题，如果主句开头不是Adam Smith，那么前面的A leading figure in the Scottish enlightenment就变成了dangling modifier

句子的concision不应该作为绝对标准，语法上的错误是绝对错误

a30024300

这个题还是应该注意同位语的问题，如果主句开头不是Adam Smith，那么前面的A leading figure in the Scottish enlightenment就变成了dangling modifier

句子的concision不应该作为绝对标准，语法上的错误是绝对错误

-- by 会员 MiaZhang (2012/12/1 21:40:38)

哦·好的··原来这样！