Vanderbilt MSF Offer w/t Scholarship

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Cong!!!!YM!!!!!!!!!

asiriel

Hello there,

Can you please offer me some tips on the essays?
For essay 1- personal statement, I used one paragraph writing about my ST/LT , Academic BG,interests,volunteering  and finance club experience respectively. And then tie them back to the program itself.I am kinda confused about essay 2: in what way would you impact Owen as an alumna and a student. How are you going to foster change in Owen community.

A past applicant told me to write 2-3 personal experiences, and emphasize Leadership, technical and teamwork skills.

Therefore, I used my volunteer facillitator, finance club experience(I am a bit worried that I used redundant experience, but those two represented me as a qualified candidate the most.. , but I narrated in a different perspective). In addition, my short term actions were based on those experience I mentioned.  But i am still undecided as what I am goingn to impact Owen as an alumna ( I stated that if I were a fund manager in China one day, I will offer Owen alumni a opportunity to work inan emerging market and can organized industy trips to current students( is that weak?)In you opinion, do my essays meet their requirement or convincing enough?

Thank you so much for your time and advice.

vannesssky310

Hello there,

Can you please offer me some tips on the essays?
For essay 1- personal statement, I used one paragraph writing about my ST/LT , Academic BG,interests,volunteering  and finance club experience respectively. And then tie them back to the program itself.I am kinda confused about essay 2: in what way would you impact Owen as an alumna and a student. How are you going to foster change in Owen community.

A past applicant told me to write 2-3 personal experiences, and emphasize Leadership, technical and teamwork skills.

Therefore, I used my volunteer facillitator, finance club experience(I am a bit worried that I used redundant experience, but those two represented me as a qualified candidate the most.. , but I narrated in a different perspective). In addition, my short term actions were based on those experience I mentioned.  But i am still undecided as what I am goingn to impact Owen as an alumna ( I stated that if I were a fund manager in China one day, I will offer Owen alumni a opportunity to work inan emerging market and can organized industy trips to current students( is that weak?)In you opinion, do my essays meet their requirement or convincing enough?

Thank you so much for your time and advice.

-- by 会员 asiriel (2012/11/29 19:32:21)

Thank you so much for your msg. I would be more than happy to help. You could PM me your essays and I will take a look. Thanks!

howie0420

求lz, 提供kate 面试内容！~

-- by 会员 czwkevin (2012/11/29 13:47:40)

Kate问了我三个问题:
Self-Introduction
Why MSF
Why Vanderbilt


然后她就开始说Vandy MSF怎么怎么好了。。。

-- by 会员 vannesssky310 (2012/11/29 14:10:05)

我都要被kate的背景吓晕了，就问了这几个fit的问题？有任何专业相关的吗？我准备去campus facetoface面。。不知道会怎么样。。

vannesssky310

求lz, 提供kate 面试内容！~

-- by 会员 czwkevin (2012/11/29 13:47:40)

Kate问了我三个问题:
Self-Introduction
Why MSF
Why Vanderbilt


然后她就开始说Vandy MSF怎么怎么好了。。。

-- by 会员 vannesssky310 (2012/11/29 14:10:05)

我都要被kate的背景吓晕了，就问了这几个fit的问题？有任何专业相关的吗？我准备去campus facetoface面。。不知道会怎么样。。

-- by 会员 howie0420 (2012/11/30 9:59:54)

没有tech的，纯conversational的。。。她是ANU的本硕博。。。有澳洲口音，不过人是很好的呢。你是神马背景？

下一站何先生

我是来膜拜的。
准备明年申请这所dream呀。

vannesssky310

我是来膜拜的。
准备明年申请这所dream呀。

-- by 会员 下一站何先生 (2012/11/30 11:30:28)

大三你都开始逛CD想申请了哦

Jovenwu

今天收到VANDY的拒信，祝贺楼主！

tinaskyxia

恭喜楼主！打算申Vandy的第二轮，楼主能不能帮我看下ESSAY呢？

vannesssky310

恭喜楼主！打算申Vandy的第二轮，楼主能不能帮我看下ESSAY呢？

-- by 会员 tinaskyxia (2012/11/30 21:59:10)

Sure, send it to my email: vanness.yang(在) gmail.com with your background info.