求助 og13 SC一道

lttbelief

DT49.As an actress and, more importantly, as a teacher of acting, Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, who trained several generations of actors including Marlon Brando and Robert De Niro.

A.Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, who trained several generations of actors including

B.Stella Adler, one of the most influential artists in the American theater, trained several generations of actors who include

B.Stella Adler, one of the most influential artists in the American theater, trained several generations of actors who include
C.Stella Adler was one of the most influential artists in the American theater, training several generations of actors whose ranks included

D. one of the most influential artists in the American theater was Stella Adler, who trained several generations of actors including

E.one of the most influential artists in the American theater, Stella Adler, trained several generations of actors whose ranks included



这道题B答案的解释是This construction, in which the subject is
both preceded and followed by modifiers, is
awkward; the verbs should be consistently in
the past tense, but include is present tense.  
对于上面绿色字体那部分的解释不明白  主语哪里有前后都有修饰语啊？

CC5

前面俩as引导的从句都是修饰SA的
后面的那个one of。。插入语也是修饰SA的

lttbelief

前面俩as引导的从句都是修饰SA的
后面的那个one of。。插入语也是修饰SA的

-- by 会员 CC5 (2012/10/28 0:08:26)

哦哦 我懂了  我没有看到画线前的部分 谢谢