Contributes on an enjoyable vacation, please select one of three selection. Good food, Good location and with good friends to travel.
Good place and good food are both traditional elements of the definition of a wonderful vacation.They can make you relaxed with the whole body and heart.But, （加了太多逗号啊）in my oppinion,good friends are more important than those enjoyment.
Addmittedly,good place and good food do play an essential role in a great travel.You can enjoy a beautiful landscape which are (is) so different from the cities'.It's a good way to release you from the busy daily work.And good food is also a great reward of ( for用of是表示属于）your hard work and increases（单数谓语动词）the quality of your trip.But I don't think just they two elements can make a perfect vacation.
The most importantly, we human are emotional creature,we need to share happiness, sorrow or any emotions with others especially our friends.Vacation is no exception.Only if we travel with friends can（什么意思呢）we get more pleasure.Traveling on you own sometimes can make you feel lonely.（英文标点符号啊）I still remembered the trip that I went to Shanghai for the expos with several friends.We spent lots of unforgettable time together.We never felt boring, even we spent several hours waiting for the entrance of some popular exhibitions.I suppose that if I went there by myself it would probably a terrible vacation.Another advantage of friends I have to mention is that from my view, sharing food with friends makes the food more delicious.
Secondly, friends are the people who will help you whenever you meet troubles.When you go on a trip,（这个文章表达有问题，顺序没搞懂）you possibly go to a
place you are unfamiliar with.And no one can be sure that we won't （这句话双重否定什么意思呢，没看懂）meet any challenges,varing （什么词？）from languages problem, sudden attack of illness etc.If （主语呢）having a friend accompany with you, you won't feel helpless.Take the example of my experience of going to Hongkong.As we all know, Hongkong has lots of narrow streets and you may easily get lost.I once faced this problem and because of the language problem I can't find my way.Fortunately,I met a （到底是几个人啊）students whose chinese was（到底是几个人啊） very well and he （到底是几个人啊）helped me arrive the destination.
When you have a vacation, don't forget to take a good friend with you.It'll undoubtedly make your trip interesting and enjoyable.
Contributes on an enjoyable vacation, please select one of three selection. Good food, Good location and with good friends to travel.
Good place and good food are both traditional elements of the definition of a wonderful vacation.They can make you relaxed with the whole body and heart.But, （加了太多逗号啊）in my oppinion,good friends are more important than those enjoyment.
Addmittedly,good place and good food do play an essential role in a great travel.You can enjoy a beautiful landscape which are (is) so different from the cities'.It's a good way to release you from the busy daily work.And good food is also a great reward of ( for用of是表示属于）your hard work and increases（单数谓语动词）the quality of your trip.But I don't think just they two elements can make a perfect vacation.
The most importantly, we human are emotional creature,we need to share happiness, sorrow or any emotions with others especially our friends.Vacation is no exception.Only if we travel with friends can（什么意思呢）we get more pleasure.Traveling on you own sometimes can make you feel lonely.（英文标点符号啊）I still remembered the trip that I went to Shanghai for the expos with several friends.We spent lots of unforgettable time together.We never felt boring, even we spent several hours waiting for the entrance of some popular exhibitions.I suppose that if I went there by myself it would probably a terrible vacation.Another advantage of friends I have to mention is that from my view, sharing food with friends makes the food more delicious.
Secondly, friends are the people who will help you whenever you meet troubles.When you go on a trip,（这个文章表达有问题，顺序没搞懂）you possibly go to a
place you are unfamiliar with.And no one can be sure that we won't （这句话双重否定什么意思呢，没看懂）meet any challenges,varing （什么词？）from languages problem, sudden attack of illness etc.If （主语呢）having a friend accompany with you, you won't feel helpless.Take the example of my experience of going to Hongkong.As we all know, Hongkong has lots of narrow streets and you may easily get lost.I once faced this problem and because of the language problem I can't find my way.Fortunately,I met a （到底是几个人啊）students whose chinese was（到底是几个人啊） very well and he （到底是几个人啊）helped me arrive the destination.
When you have a vacation, don't forget to take a good friend with you.It'll undoubtedly make your trip interesting and enjoyable.
1月30日 独立 We all have own preference on friends.But in general ,honesty is the typical characteristics we care about most. In my view,being honesty is the prerequisite of a friendship.Without honesty,a friendship is eaily to be disrupted.Besides , the advantages of being honesty is far outweigh than its disadvantages,so I think it’s possible to be completely honest to our friends.
Being honesty sometimes may hurt us feeling,but I would like to hear the truth rather than some fake compliment.Not only should my friend be honest with me,but also I need to do so.This is a real friendship.I can understand why people like to hear praises from others.But we should keep in mind that those good words can’t change anything.Others say “you are fit in that cloth.”but it may just a politeness fomula regardless of the fact you don’t.At this time,friends should be the ones who tell us the truth,so we can make some changes to look better.The truth doesn’t make any negative effect ，instead it help us improve.
Additionally,we all like to be easy and just perform the real us.But in many situation we just have to lie in order to protect our images in front of others.Fortunately, friends give me spaces to just be myself,I can do whatever I want instead of pretend to be perfect.This kind of friendship base on honesty.In a word ,being honest help us relax.
Once my friend lie to me,I feel hard to trust her .Can anyone be sure that she won’t lie to me anymore？I think the reason why she lie is that she want to hide something from me or she just think I am the kind of person who will eaisly get angry to her.That means she doesn’t trust me either.The relationship keeping skeptical of each other isn’t the real friendship I want.
All in all,cherish your friendship and be honest with your friends.Only be that way your friendship can be permanent.
1月30日 独立 We all have (+our) own preference on friends.But in general ,honesty is the typical characteristics (这里应该去掉s，因为前面是is) we care about most. In my view,being honesty is the prerequisite of a friendship (friendship作友谊讲时是不可数名词，应该去掉a) .Without honesty,a friendship (friendship作友谊讲时是不可数名词，应该去掉a) is eaily (应该是easy) to be disrupted (个人觉得换成destroyed可能会好一点) .Besides , the advantages of being honesty (应该是honest) is (应该是are，主谓一致) far outweigh(这个是动词，如果非要用的话，建议改成the advantages outweigh the disvantages) than its disadvantages,so I think it’s possible to be completely honest to our friends.
Being honesty (应该是honest) sometimes may hurt us (应该是our) feeling,but I would like to hear the truth rather than some fake compliment (compliment可数，后面应该加s).Not only should my friend (后面应该加s) be honest with me,but also I need to (need后面不加to) do so.This is a (friendship作友谊讲时是不可数名词，应该去掉a)real friendship.I can understand why people like to hear praises from others.But we should keep in mind that those good words can’t change anything.Others say “you are fit in that cloth (首先cloth 是布的意思，应该改成clothes，其次这句话都有问题，fit in的具体含义你可以看这里 http://dict.baidu.com/s?wd=fit+in 应该改成 that clothes fits you).”but it may just(+be) a politeness (应该改成polite，这里应该是形容词) fomula (正确形式应该是formula，但是用在这里感觉不恰当，也许这句话改成 he or she may just be polite会好一点) regardless of the fact you don’t (根据我的改法，这里应该是it doesn't) .At this time,friends should be the ones who tell us the truth,so we can make some changes to look better.The truth doesn’t make any negative effect ，instead it help us improve.
Additionally,we all like to be easy and just perform (like 后面加V_ing，performing) the real us.But in many situation (+s) we just have to lie in order to protect our images in front of others.Fortunately, friends give me (和前面一致的话，这里应该是us) spaces to just be myself(和前面一致的话，这里应该是ourselves),I can do whatever I want instead of pretend (pretending) to be perfect.This kind of friendship (+is) base (based) on honesty.In a word ,being honest help us relax.
Once my friend lie to(once后面加完成时，has lied) me,I feel hard to trust her(建议改成him or her) .Can anyone be sure that she won’t lie to me anymore？I think the reason why she lie (第三人称单数，lies) is that she want (第三人称单数，wants) to hide something from me or she just think (第三人称单数，thinks)I am the kind of person who will eaisly (单纯的拼写错误，easily) get angry to (应该改成at) her.That means she doesn’t trust me either.The relationship keeping skeptical of each other (友谊不是人，不能怀疑对方，建议改成The relationship during which we have been keeping skeptical of each other ) isn’t the real friendship I want.
All in all,cherish your friendship and be honest with your friends.Only be that way your friendship can (can应该提前) be permanent.
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