GWD26-Q24求解惑。。

maybe1991

GWD26-Q24









According to United States census data, while there was about one-third of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, in 2000, almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home.
 






















A.     while there was about one-third of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, in 2000, almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home.









B.      there were about one-third of mothers with young children who worked outside the home in 1975; in 2000, almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home









C.     in 1975 about one-third of mothers with young children worked outside the home; in 2000, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home









D.     even though in 1975 there were about one-third of mothers with young children who worked outside the home, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home in 2000









E.      with about one-third of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home in 2000

我想问的是5个选项中有those mothers 也有such mothers 我看原来大家讨论的时候有人说those mothers是错的 因为还是指的是1975年的妈妈 但是mahattan上说those和that指的是new copies啊 求解惑。。。  谢谢~

滨江小陆

用those是错误的，因为those指代了前文提到的人或物，那就相当于说之前美国三分之一的有孩子的母亲在外工作，后来2000年这批母亲中的三分之二又在外工作，意思不对。用such指代了这一类的母亲就没有问题了。

maybe1991

用those是错误的，因为those指代了前文提到的人或物，那就相当于说之前美国三分之一的有孩子的母亲在外工作，后来2000年这批母亲中的三分之二又在外工作，意思不对。用such指代了这一类的母亲就没有问题了。

-- by 会员 滨江小陆 (2012/10/27 15:28:06)

那有些比较选项中比如cars in1800...are twice more than those produced...in 1900 这里面的those是指代的的new copies吧 为什么这道题不行呢？不明白啊。。。。

ayoyoyo

ADE介词都有明显的意思错误或语法错误。

BC来看，B中用there be结构、用who跳跃修饰都不太好，但并无错误；意思上错误较严重的就是这个those mothers，这样和前面提到的mothers成了同一群人，而实际表达的含义并不是“同一群”人，而是“同一类”人。

用those去修饰mothers和单用those的含义并不一样。单用those的话，如果上下文含义清晰，是可以指代“同一类”事物的；但those mothers指的就是前述提到的这些mothers，是“同一群”的概念。

C选项既平行，修饰又清晰，还用such避免了上述歧义，所以正确。

李姿GMAT700

maybe1991 发表于 2012-10-28 13:00
用those是错误的，因为those指代了前文提到的人或物，那就相当于说之前美国三分之一的有孩子的母亲在外 ...

是哦？我也很迷惑