ISSUE求指教

hsloner

题目：46. Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
大学应该要求每个学生选修自己专业以外的各种学科。
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take.
In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous
and explain how these examples shape your position.



我的内容：
Sometimes we should acknowledge that takepart of courses outside the student`s filed today will be good for their future.But whether would it mislead them to mistake by overemphasizing the importanceof the outside field? A student probably put most of their attentions to whatthey major in.

        Nowyou can not find a curriculum exist independently. Instead of many cross-disciplineare favorite. Also as we known that philosophy is the foundation of allsubject. When one get succeed in one field he or her will be beneficial fromother field more or less. Since lots of disciplines were interrelated, the researchon of courses outside of the student`s own field may help the research of hismajor.

        Itis impossible for those who focus their attention on concerning fields tosatisfy the technologically advanced social needs when they finish school. Atfirst, taking a variety of courses outside the student `s field of study will broaden our field of vision. Andoccasionally the outside learning will help one get closer to the truth andcome to the best advantageous judgment. Then People always don`t know what theyneed until it appears on their eyes. So Studying outside their own field probablywill make them discovery where lies their real interests and potential.
        Nevertheless,they should not give up their major subject when exploring a new academic field.It is the purpose the universities settle major course for everyone. Taking avariety of courses outside student`s major subject not only make them informed,but also lead them to commonplace careers. And in most case the later situationappears more likely. Because they always be satisfied with a smattering ofknowledge, they could not find their social position. And the society also losethe many potential elite.
        Abetter alternative method maybe is, undoubtedly a student should concentrate ontheir major field, and they can explore partial course outside their field ofstudy as well while it will not make a conflict with your major.

竹林中人

建议你把提纲附上。开头写的不太好，自己的观点不太明显或者说是不太肯定。
中间内容不够深入而具体，建议多读读ＯＧ上范文

hsloner

开头前面是做一些让步。。最后一句是我的观点。。。竹林中人  这篇ISSUE大概能那多少分啊？？？？ 您给打个分数  再低我也能接受

竹林中人

2——2.5吧

hsloner

谢谢啊