独立写作求狠批

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9.22就考了，这是练习的第二篇独立写作。。求狠批。。完全不知道该用什么模板。。先谢过了

用的是上面神马写作小分队的第一道题
9月9日
Compared with people who live in urban areas, the people who live in rural areas can take better care of their families.


Modern city people have been annoyed about how their family life being disturbde by all kinds of issues in cities, like colleague gathering after work, much time trapped in the traffic jam, and endless overtime. Many of them are longning for a life in the countryside, where they think may have enough time and energy to spend with their family and take care of them better. However, I think it a little naive to believe in the effect of simply changing living locaitons over family relationships, which I would illustrate in detail below.

Three is no doubt about the advantages brought by living in the countryside: beautiful enivronment, with fresh air, clean water and amazing sightseeing, which will help relax people's emotions, therefore relieving them form anxious work and have mood to play with their family members. Another goodness for countryside life is that you will have less connections with other people than in cities. Time saved from attending various social activities can be spent with your wife/husband and children, therefore providing you the opportunity to improve the realtionships between each other. Further, it will take you maybe other fifteem minutes from home to your workplace, or even you just work at home. All these would bring you huge convenience and make you interact with your family more.

However the usually less equipped facilities in the rural areas cause problems for normal life of family. There may be a huge shopping center, but it may take thirty minutes' drive from your home. The primary school in town is probably not teaching with the same quality as they do in large cities. Besides, the small clinic may have only one doctor, and you need to drive two hours to the nearby comprehensive hospitals for some sudden diseases. The above inconveniences mentioned all lead to the difficulty of taking good care of one's family members.

Lastly and most importantly, whether one can take care of his or her family members do not rely on the specific location the family are liveing in much. Instead, it is determined by the man's attitude towards family. If he or she values family more important than his/her career, then he/she would devote to spending a lot of time with them and endeavoring themselves to look after their family members, no matter where they are, in a prosperous city or in a quite small town. On the contrary, some private guy would abandon his or her family entirely if he or she only cares about him/herself. For this kind of guy, even if he lives in a perfect locaiton with both advantages of rural and urban areas, his or her family would not feel the care from the guy.