梨花海棠君的作文帖

thinking99

tpo20. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree that successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
let’s take Edison as an example, he is one of the most famous inventors in the world. He invented a lot of new things during his life, if he just followed the forerunners and didn’t try new things, there will be much fewer useful inventions today.
When he thought about inventing something that can light the room, he tried thousands of times with different materials, he found some materials could light the room, but he didn’t stop and do what he know how to do well, instead, he tried more new materials, and at last found the most suitable one. If he just didn’t take the risk of failing, I think bulbs today can’t produce such bright light in our daily life.
And another example to illustrate my opinion is George Jobs, he took the risk of being fired and losing all his money to specify his Apple products, if he just followed Microsoft, and did some adaptions to the products like Microsoft company, it will be a huge loss of today’ high-tech industry, and with the fact that Apple products like Iphone, Ipod and other products are popular all over the world, George did his best to be a successful person and got a lot profits.
In conclusion, successful people are dare to try new things and take risks, they may face great challenges during the process of the experience, but if all people follow the old things and just make adaptions, there will be no creation and our world will not develop as today.

sallygreen

周末考试哟哟~
此必须是神贴，请愿周末作文27+，求保佑，定来还愿！！！

Mint静默

马上要考了，拜大神
下星期天求作文27+，要求真的不高，上了我一定会来还愿的。

晓野的野

谢谢梨花海棠君

Mint静默

Mint静默 发表于 2013-8-23 13:14
马上要考了，拜大神
下星期天求作文27+，要求真的不高，上了我一定会来还愿的。
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来还愿了。
虽然没有27，但是当时独立确实写得不好，fair也是意料之中~
anyway，分数够申请了，撒花

小镜儿爱木子

小镜儿爱木子 发表于 2013-7-18 00:34
周末考试，我也来膜拜下帖子求仙气，这几天把这几篇文章好好学习下，求保佑27+，定来还愿~ ...

9.8的考试28了，虽然不是那次也来还个愿吧，后天又考G，加油！

oceanflying2013

请问大牛可以介绍一下学习英语的经验吗？真的是太牛了。。。

roxlv

只能说，在不用幼稚的例子还能写出这么高质量的文章，楼主一定下了苦功夫``~
并且逻辑思路超级缜密~
学习！
希望大神能继续发美文供我们学习呀~~！

fleur0323

首先必须膜拜！！！！！
其次有些问题恳请大神解答：
1、我是考雅思 看了看和托福题目差不多 但要求是40min250+words 字数比托福少 ~  能加入写作小分队吗？如若批改会耽误其他同学吗？
2、 我的雅思作文分数是5或5.5 好低啊~ 各种错误 逻辑 语法 用词 造句   怎样提高 我的作文需6.5 下月24号就考了。。。
跪求大神点拨啊 ~~   感谢感谢！

risedream

今天考，请CD大神保佑！！