求助各位一道语法题~

17tomato

Citing therecent increase in earnings by several computer companies, economists feel thata cycle has begun in which personal computer users, especially corporateconsumers, are replacing their PC’s with more powerful models.

A.   a cycle has begun in which personal computerusers
B.   a cycle for personal computer users hasbegun in which they
C.   there is a cycle beginning for personalcomputer users
D.   it is the beginning of a cycle for personalcomputer users
E.    personal computer users are in the beginningof a cycle when they

请问E错在哪里，然后我不明白A和B的in which 修饰什么东西
答案回复可见~

答案A~

djdj520r

先瞅瞅答案

djdj520r

in which 修饰circle

keithyang926

in which修饰 cycle，has begun是非常短的谓语结构，而in which这个modifier是一长串，最有效的表达是把in which置后。这样的操作方式比较并不少见。

djdj520r

E选项的错误是不是因为 when前面没有表示具体时间的名词呢？

╮(╯▽╰)╭不太清楚~

keithyang926

E中，at the beginning优于in the beginning, in the beginning一般放在句首，意为initially. 在原句中begin这个动作有明确的主语cycle, 而在E中完全体会不出begin的动词意向，更没有原句里a cycle has started这个意思。E很奇怪的说消费者在一个cycle的某个环节或阶段，从原句中得不到此信息。

所以E，unidiomatical and confusing.

pinkking

看答案先

pinkking

觉得E把句子的重心转移了

阳光柠檬

偶也来看看

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