一个关于写personal statement的严肃话题

panweixd

我现在在写一篇essay，要求写下What qualities do you have that will make you a good accountant?我写了关于integrity的。然后我在essay里面这么写：In term of integrity, all I can say is that I’ve never been in a situation where my integrity is challenged. Hopefully, being honest here in this essay could possibly show some of my integrity. 这样会不会被劈死

frankchenxi

我觉得这么写并不support你是否有integrity。

maggie睿瑛

你写了一个你没有的干什么？有那么多quality你挑一个你能写的呗

Karmalot

It's redundant and does not make sense (to me at least).

hangli2

高中语文学过写议论文吧。。。
论点：我很诚实
论据：我敢说我很诚实
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论证过程呢？

cannotliu

逻辑上自我论证了
命题的呈现不能论证命题

LZ有没有写ps的大纲分享下呢？