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specialcognac

回楼上的mm，有such ...as的用法，和such as意思一样，见LONGMAN的解释

such
5. used to show that you think that something is not good enough or that there is not enough of it
    such as it is/such as they are etc We will look at the evidence, such as it is, for each of these theories.
    such ... as
    formal Such food as they gave us was scarcely fit to eat.
6. formal used to refer only to people or things of a particular group or kind
    such ... as/who/that
    Such individuals who take up this role often find life frustrating.
    such of something/somebody as
    Such of you as wish to leave may do so now.

这题的such ... as的用法应该就是朗文里的6这个解释了，也是做举例用的

snowofjune

终于找到组织了

snowofjune

我在做题的时候就犹豫不决,认为没有一个perfect的答案，每个答案都有错，只能矮子里面拔长子，选了D，没想到还是错。我当时觉得B不好就是因为从来没有碰到过such ... as分开用的正确选项。现在得记住了，D的确不平行。但是B中的the harvesting,又为何不是the harvest呢？

JUJUCHENG

harvest的意思为：n.收获, 收成, 结果, 成果
而harvesting的意思只有一个：n.收获

bmwedward

Building on civilizations that preceded them in coastal Peru, the Mochica developed their own elaborate society, based on cultivating such crops like corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and shellfish, and exploiting other wild and domestic resources.

A.      based on cultivating such crops like corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and shellfish, and exploiting

      無such......like A nad B 的用法

B.       based on the cultivation of such crops as corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and seafood, and the exploitation of

      原文應為 developed their own elaborate society which is based on...... , 紅字部分為對稱

C.      and basing it on the cultivation of crops like corn and beans, harvesting fish and seafood, and the exploiting of

      basing前面主詞為誰? Mochica or society 不清楚, 且it 指代誰也不清楚, 紅字部分也不對稱

D.      and they based it on their cultivation of crops such as corn and beans, the harvest of fish and seafood, and exploiting

      語意不對, 他們根據這個...剩下解釋與上雷同

E.       and they based it on their cultivating such crops like corn and beans, their harvest of fish and shellfish, and they exploited
        

     語意不對, 他們根據這個...剩下解釋與上雷同

lazyinbed

看看大牛mm是怎么解释的,这个based属于情况1,是没有修饰歧义的

以下是引用tigercaiqun在2008-2-21 22:31:00的发言：

我的理解:

1.当过去分词在句末时，不管有无逗号，都是就近修饰名词;

2.现在分词在句末时，无逗号是就近修饰的名词的定语；

3.当现在分词在句尾且前有逗号时,修饰邻近句子的主语,做主语的伴随状语或做句子的伴随结果.因此不能用句尾现在分词修饰前面句尾的名词. 所以OG127说C选项:"the phrasehaving been assigned...is uncertain in reference,making the sentence unclear."-->就是说这个现在分词本来是应该修饰前面的employee的,却变成了修饰主语governments了.  (另外在GMAT里,having been done的用法错误,应直接用done) 

避免上述错误的方法:所修饰的名词在句尾用定语从句修饰--OG127正确选项B (而不用加逗号的现在分词修饰.其实分词是定语从句的省略形式,在句中无逗号分词(注意是无逗号的,有逗号的在句中有歧义)就比定语从句简洁)还有 OG120也是同样道理:修饰句尾名词,正确选项A用定语从句.E选项的句尾现在分词错误.

4.当现在/过去分词在句中且前没有逗号,修饰前面紧邻名词;

5.当现在/过去分词在句中且前后都有逗号,有歧义:1)修饰前面紧邻的名词,2)向后修饰后面句子的主语.

  这种结构在GMAT肯定错,如果修饰某句主语,则避免将该分词置于以名词结尾的句后.避免方式:1)用定语从句/介词短语明确修饰对象.2)可将分词提到句首,所修饰主语及所在句子紧跟其后-->形成句首分词修饰句子主语.见OG179

6.在前面有多个名词如名词1+介词+名词2结构,而要用分词修饰名词1时,为避免歧义要重复名词1即用同位语结构:名词1+介词+名词2,名词1+分词.见OG208

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runzhuo

看了半天还是不明白e为什么错，请叫nn们

难道based on 不是可是说成修饰society，也可以说作状语么。。。。。这不是歧义么

minititan

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zbna5

以下是引用lazyinbed在2008/12/15 5:23:00的发言：

看看大牛mm是怎么解释的,这个based属于情况1,是没有修饰歧义的

以下是引用tigercaiqun在2008-2-21 22:31:00的发言：

我的理解:

1.当过去分词在句末时，不管有无逗号，都是就近修饰名词;

2.现在分词在句末时，无逗号是就近修饰的名词的定语；

3.当现在分词在句尾且前有逗号时,修饰邻近句子的主语,做主语的伴随状语或做句子的伴随结果.因此不能用句尾现在分词修饰前面句尾的名词. 所以OG127说C选项:"the phrasehaving been assigned...is uncertain in reference,making the sentence unclear."-->就是说这个现在分词本来是应该修饰前面的employee的,却变成了修饰主语governments了.  (另外在GMAT里,having been done的用法错误,应直接用done) 

避免上述错误的方法:所修饰的名词在句尾用定语从句修饰--OG127正确选项B (而不用加逗号的现在分词修饰.其实分词是定语从句的省略形式,在句中无逗号分词(注意是无逗号的,有逗号的在句中有歧义)就比定语从句简洁)还有 OG120也是同样道理:修饰句尾名词,正确选项A用定语从句.E选项的句尾现在分词错误.

4.当现在/过去分词在句中且前没有逗号,修饰前面紧邻名词;

5.当现在/过去分词在句中且前后都有逗号,有歧义:1)修饰前面紧邻的名词,2)向后修饰后面句子的主语.

  这种结构在GMAT肯定错,如果修饰某句主语,则避免将该分词置于以名词结尾的句后.避免方式:1)用定语从句/介词短语明确修饰对象.2)可将分词提到句首,所修饰主语及所在句子紧跟其后-->形成句首分词修饰句子主语.见OG179

6.在前面有多个名词如名词1+介词+名词2结构,而要用分词修饰名词1时,为避免歧义要重复名词1即用同位语结构:名词1+介词+名词2,名词1+分词.见OG208

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啥也不说了巨好无比!!牛!