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[Helr题库] Helr GMAT题库 周周练 Helr-SC-003 (答案和解析已放出)

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21#
发表于 2012-7-7 22:52:18 | 只看该作者
C 考平行

A 三个动词词组平行 没有必要用两个that再平行了 感觉啰嗦

B E 都改变句意了

D 平行意思变了
22#
发表于 2012-7-7 23:15:09 | 只看该作者
选C
23#
发表于 2012-7-8 11:45:27 | 只看该作者
觉得选C哈,还没看大家的分析,先凭个人感觉分析一个
A 首先如果是后面那个, and that 这样的话必然是修饰petitions, 那么petitions provide a fund 逻辑不通。就算是用被动fund compensated来修饰victims也应该去掉a.
B如果不是and to authorize 而是 and authorize 就非得是 unqualifiedly authorize 才并列,而这样句意不通
C正确,并且这样的句式也正迎合了句末的resulting from the abuse.
Dfor  for 神马的改变主句意思了。。。
E也改变主句意思了,句子前提是要求学校对滥用作出彻底的道歉,而这里的that 定语从句却已经表示的是那些已经对滥用作出彻底道歉的学校,所以至少应该在that 后面加上they 才能改变从句为宾语从句来表达原意。


第一次发哈,新人,求老师指导~
24#
发表于 2012-7-8 13:34:28 | 只看该作者
选:C
A,层次不明,比较啰嗦
B.似乎是前两个修饰,为了第三个的to provide...
C.正确。
D.三个短语平行,逻辑不通
E.to并列,原句的层次是不同的
25#
发表于 2012-7-9 11:52:05 | 只看该作者
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我选E
A 中,that 指代petition, petition urge schools 逻辑意思不合理
B中,which 指代petition, petition urge schools 逻辑意思不合理
C纠结了一下,觉得改变了原句的意思,原句的意思是说要urge offer an unqualified apology for any abuse的学校去authorize和provide a fund, 而C 则变成了要urge schools to offer
D中,for + 名词表目的永远错
26#
发表于 2012-7-10 04:12:28 | 只看该作者
Select C.

Parallel structure, I guess...
27#
发表于 2012-7-10 04:16:15 | 只看该作者
I dont know how to interpret the meaning of "unqualified"... It's so weird to use unqualified to describe apology
28#
发表于 2012-7-10 05:25:40 | 只看该作者
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Helr-SC-003
Professor Dan Ariely and Kalvin Martin have collaborated on petitions that urge schools to offer an unqualified apology for any abuse and to authorize an independent investigation, and that provide a fund compensated victims for therapy and for other expenses or losses resulting from the abuse.
A. petitions that urge schools to offer an unqualified apology for any abuse and to authorize an independent investigation, and that provide a fund compensated victims for therapy and for
B. petitions, which urge schools to unqualifiedly offer apology for any abuse and authorize an independent investigation, to provide a fund to compensate victims for therapy and
C. petitions urging schools to offer an unqualified apology for any abuse, to authorize an independent investigation, and to provide a fund to compensate victims for therapy and for
D. petitions to urge schools that offer an unqualified apology for any abuse, for the authorization of an independent investigation, and for the provision of a fund to compensate victims for therapy and
E. petitions to urge schools that unqualifiedly offer apology for any abuse, to authorize an independent investigation, and to provide a fund that compensate victims for therapy and for
-- by 会员 GMAT (2012/7/5 17:38:33)



A. parallel structure mistake
B. parallel structure mistake
C. Correct
D. urge... to..   /  parallel structure
E. urge...to.. / unqualifiedly offer apology ( change meaning) / parallel structure
29#
发表于 2012-7-10 10:38:50 | 只看该作者
C
30#
发表于 2012-7-14 02:54:08 | 只看该作者
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应该选C
A 逻辑意思不对 that指代的内容说不通
B unqualifiedly使用不当;平行结构使用不当
C 正确;
D 应该是三个结构平行,第一个部分破坏了平行结构
E unqualifiedly使用不当;to urge school that...这个表达也太awkward and wordy了吧
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