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字数387 时间:2.3个小时(小弟第一次写)... 题目: As people rely more on technology to solve the problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surly deteriorate.
提纲: 1. Beginning. 2. technology surly deteriorate people’s ability to think for themselves in some cases such as calculate and pose a great threat to humanity such as environmental and nuclear pollution. 3. However, technology like frees people from perilous and troublesome work, computer does the large amount of computation, robots take the place of workers, leaving people much time to do more creative and meaningful things. 4. Technology meliorate the quality of people’s daily lives, such and the living condition, education and medical assurance. Also, humanity has made great progress in the exploration of the unknown world, reaching an unprecedented achievement. 5. End.
正文: For the technology has been involved in every aspect of daily life, the speaker claimed that it will deteriorate the ability of people to think for themselves. Actually in my point of view, I don’t agree with this statement that is in fact unilateral. Along with the advance of technology in recent lives, we cannot deny that people's ability to think for themselves is surely deteriorating. And the conclusion can be drew from many cases. For instance, as students rely more andmore on calculators, their counting ability is rapidly decreasing, thereby creatinga vicious cycle that they cannot do the computation without calculators. Also,the development of technology has posed a great threat to humanity. For example, the environmental pollution such as the global warming, nuclear leakand so forth make it difficult to live a good condition. Therefore, people become the slaves of technology. However, it is technology that helps people free from some perilous and troublesome work. Before, people took risks to diving deep into the water or climbing high onto the mountain to seek for precious resources. But now moreand more robots take the place of the workers to do the minatory work. What’s more, people nowadays make use of computers to dolarge amount of computations and they take advantage of production line toreplace the repeated labor. All of these make it possible for people to savetime and energy so that they could devote themselves to more creative and meaningful work and thinking. Additionally, the quality of people's lives has conspicuously improved because of technology. The living condition, education and medical insuranceare greatly meliorated to an inconceivable level. In addition, technology provides people with effective instruments for intellectual work. Humanity hasmade great progress in the exploration of the unknown world, the discovery of thetheory of relativity and the structure of DNA, the rapid development of thespace and network technology, help reaching an unprecedented achievement. Consequently,due to analysis and reasons I have discussed above, we may safely arrive to conclude that technology admittedly leavessome problems to be desired, but the advantages far overweigh the drawbacks.And to keep pace with technology and benefit most from it, all we need is to step further, think further and make most of the technology.
修改了几遍了。400字都还差几个。。不知道怎么填充内容,例子可能也不够代表.,求大神解答怎么写长啊。。准备要自己先总结个模板来套了求大家拍、、狠拍。。。。。。 |
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