【求助】OG12-26的A选项outnumbering为什么不能解释为结果状语呢？之前没问过.

ainiAnnie

提句子主干理解句意，就一目了然了哇~
A选项的主干是：
ED's letters to SHD were written over a period ( ), outnumbering her letter to anyone else.
主句讲述的是time (period)，v-ing 讲述的是number (outnumbering)
这两者毫不相干，所以这句话就是non-sense!

正确的句子主干是：
ED's letters to SHD (, which ____,) outnumbered her letter to anyone else.

OG12-26
Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.
我知道做伴随肯定说不通，毕竟不是同时发生的；
但是如果解释成结果状语不行吗？结果状语修饰整个句子，又不需要主语是动作的发出者。ED给SH写了很多信，结果是数量超过了写给任何人的。
求解答，谢谢！！！O(∩_∩)O~

-- by 会员 liisabella (2012/4/9 20:20:28)

-- by 会员 babybearmm (2012/4/10 12:22:12)

看了baby姐姐的解释，就彻底清除啦~也看懂og上对于A选项的解释了：
The long, wordy opening clause givestoo much emphasis to the period when Dickinson's letters were written
记得以前看Ron的帖子的时候，他在一些问题上提过 modifiers 要 make sense,一直没在意，现在体会深刻了~~
谢谢baby姐姐~~~

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Baby大神驾到，我赶紧追问一句。这一题和OG47题的区别在哪里呢？我觉得很相似，但为什么一个用现在分词做结果状语，一个却是main verb。在下面贴一下这两题，求baby大神解答！！！
OG 26：
26.Emily Dickinson's letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.

(A)Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumbering

(B)Dickinson were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ended shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumber

(C)Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and that ends shortly before Emily's death in 1886 and outnumbering

(D)Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother, ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, and outnumbering

    （E）Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan's marriage to Emily's brother and ending shortly before Emily's death in 1886, outnumber

47.Five fledgling sea eagles left their nests in western Scotland this summer, bringing to 34 the number of wild birds successfully raised since transplants from Norway began in 1975.

(A)bringing

(B)and brings

(C)and it brings

(D)and it brought

(E)and brought

按照Baby大神的解释的话，47中第一句话和第二句话也木有神马联系啊，却可以做结果状语……为什么要选bringing呢……快考试了，跪求大神帮忙！！！

zzrrqq0708

提句子主干理解句意，就一目了然了哇~
A选项的主干是：
ED's letters to SHD were written over a period ( ), outnumbering her letter to anyone else.
主句讲述的是time (period)，v-ing 讲述的是number (outnumbering)
这两者毫不相干，所以这句话就是non-sense!

正确的句子主干是：
ED's letters to SHD (, which ____,) outnumbered her letter to anyone else.

OG12-26
Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.
我知道做伴随肯定说不通，毕竟不是同时发生的；
但是如果解释成结果状语不行吗？结果状语修饰整个句子，又不需要主语是动作的发出者。ED给SH写了很多信，结果是数量超过了写给任何人的。
求解答，谢谢！！！O(∩_∩)O~

-- by 会员 liisabella (2012/4/9 20:20:28)

-- by 会员 babybearmm (2012/4/10 12:22:12)

看了baby姐姐的解释，就彻底清除啦~也看懂og上对于A选项的解释了：
The long, wordy opening clause givestoo much emphasis to the period when Dickinson's letters were written
记得以前看Ron的帖子的时候，他在一些问题上提过 modifiers 要 make sense,一直没在意，现在体会深刻了~~
谢谢baby姐姐~~~

-- by 会员 ainiAnnie (2012/5/2 9:04:29)

求baby以及各路大神解答！！！小女子谢过！！！

Roxas605

真心没有懂period和outnumbering之间的gap

难道不就是理解成：  在这个period的写信，然后这个长时间的写信的结果就是写的信outnumber之前的数量？？

难道我的智商被吃了？？？？

Ls的问题，我觉得可以理解。

47.Five fledgling sea eagles left their nests in western Scotland this summer, bringing to 34 the number of wild birds successfully raised since transplants from Norway began in 1975.

【个人观点】前后句，我读起来觉得是有关系的。  因为left的动作直接导致bringing这个结果的产生，或者说bringing这个结果一定是由...left...这个动作直接导致的。。。

至于bat和baby的真的好晦涩啊。。。求更加clarify的解释  = =（原谅我的智商）  

Roxas605

bump！！！！！

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顶上去！

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继续顶上去

yvonne703

关键是正确选项E里是outnumber 而不是outnumbered. 难道不应该是过去时吗？ 偶当时就是因为这个没选E而选了A....为什么没有人问这个？

yx06tu

个人意见，虽然A选项没有语法错误，但是A选项的主语到底是“Emily Dickson‘s letters" 还是 ”Emily Dickson‘s letters to Susan Huntington Disckson"。后者表达了句子的原意；如果是前者呢？(当然Emily Dickson‘s letters 必然大于 "her letters to anyone else") 比如说 Emily Dickson‘s letters were written to Susan Huntington Dickson, 这句话是成立的。
E选项，”which were“的使用，免除了这种歧义的可能，which不能指代人，以及复数were，都说明了which指代letters。这样句子的结构清晰无比，即Emily Dickson‘s letters to Susan Huntington Disckson， which were... ,  outnumber...

Oldvon007

请问有谁明白为什么Ron说D选项中beginning，ending and outnumbering三个项目的平行是不对的吗？