两篇Issue 求很拍!

nobody1112

many people claim that it is the welfareof its people that is the determinant

这句话有语法问题。

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/3/31 23:23:57)

many people claim that  the welfare of its people the determinant to the greatness of a nation.
这样改可以么?

普渡哥

a person are...  why use are???

普渡哥

many people claim that it is the welfareof its people that is the determinant

这句话有语法问题。

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/3/31 23:23:57)

many people claim that  the welfare of its people the determinant to the greatness of a nation.
这样改可以么?

-- by 会员 nobody1112 (2012/3/31 23:38:21)

好多了。

普渡哥

As a ruler of a nation, a person are supposedto responsible for its citizens and to give the right direction forthe whole country.

这句话有语法问题。

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/3/31 23:33:24)

这样?

-- by 会员 nobody1112 (2012/3/31 23:36:48)

这句话的语法问题很严重，重新温习一下as句法，the 和a的用法，单数复数，等。。

nobody1112

a person are...  why use are???

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/3/31 23:38:32)

I am wrong,, 写的时候就糊涂了...

nobody1112

As a ruler of a nation, a person are supposedto responsible for its citizens and to give the right direction forthe whole country.

这句话有语法问题。

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/3/31 23:33:24)

这样?

-- by 会员 nobody1112 (2012/3/31 23:36:48)

这句话的语法问题很严重，重新温习一下as句法，the 和a的用法，单数复数，等。。

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/3/31 23:40:35)

嗯...您真厉害,一下就中我的要害...从来都没搞清这些东西..
我再试一次...
As a ruler of a nation, one is supposed to be responsible for  his fellows as well as give a right direction of the country.
说实话,我看了好多次语法,还是没把 A 和 the 搞清...

普渡哥

As a ruler of a nation, a person are supposedto responsible for its citizens and to give the right direction forthe whole country.

这句话有语法问题。

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/3/31 23:33:24)

这样?

-- by 会员 nobody1112 (2012/3/31 23:36:48)

这句话的语法问题很严重，重新温习一下as句法，the 和a的用法，单数复数，等。。

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/3/31 23:40:35)

嗯...您真厉害,一下就中我的要害...从来都没搞清这些东西..
我再试一次...
As a ruler of a nation, one is supposed to be responsible for  his fellows as well as give a right direction of the country.
说实话,我看了好多次语法,还是没把 A 和 the 搞清...

-- by 会员 nobody1112 (2012/3/31 23:45:10)

好多了。。。我没有罗列你所有的句子，用一些好的句式要注意语法的，不然可以不加分反减分。多练习吧。

nobody1112

As a ruler of a nation, a person are supposedto responsible for its citizens and to give the right direction forthe whole country.

这句话有语法问题。

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/3/31 23:33:24)

这样?

-- by 会员 nobody1112 (2012/3/31 23:36:48)

这句话的语法问题很严重，重新温习一下as句法，the 和a的用法，单数复数，等。。

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/3/31 23:40:35)

嗯...您真厉害,一下就中我的要害...从来都没搞清这些东西..
我再试一次...
As a ruler of a nation, one is supposed to be responsible for  his fellows as well as give a right direction of the country.
说实话,我看了好多次语法,还是没把 A 和 the 搞清...

-- by 会员 nobody1112 (2012/3/31 23:45:10)

好多了。。。我没有罗列你所有的句子，用一些好的句式要注意语法的，不然可以不加分反减分。多练习吧。

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/3/31 23:47:34)

语法不好是硬伤...自己写糟了也看不出来...
我试着多模仿一些句式,,练熟了好了,,下次发上来希望还能多帮帮纠正一下~

hezhixun

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