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Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.

Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering

Dickinson were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ended shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber

Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and that ends shortly before Emily’s death in 1886and outnumbering

Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother, ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, and outnumbering

Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber

正确答案E,我没问题,但我觉得A从语法上说也没有问题, begining和ending并列,numbering的逻辑主语为Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson,迷惑

rhod

这是个句子重心的问题. 句子的主谓宾决定了句子的重心。

所以A和E的差别在于，A强调了were written over a period, E强调了outnumber.

两者比较, 我觉得E强调的更合理些.

nautic

我也觉得AE都对。 而E改变了原句的句子中心，应该没有A好。 怎么还是选A?

billytang1980

我认为只有E对关键是outnumber的位置和作用

如果我们把这里的那个 outnumber 看作是状语从句，我认为是有问题的，如果是状语从句，那么outnumbering her letters to anyone else.应该放在句首，这样句式上比较对称，不至于头重脚轻。

而E中把outnumber看作是谓语动词而written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886是定语修饰，句式上比较合理。

我认为现在的GWD更加注重的是那个句式和句子结构了。而不是OG上讲的平行，状语修饰等问题了。

大家讨论以下吧

fanyuan

對於E我有一個問題, E的WHICH在Dickinson後面, 難道不會有修飾上的錯誤嗎?

thanks!!

allfar

非限制性从句没什么错误吧?

MaccMichAA

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以下是引用fanyuan在2006-10-2 18:50:00的发言：

對於E我有一個問題, E的WHICH在Dickinson後面, 難道不會有修飾上的錯誤嗎?

thanks!!

which were修饰letters

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smoker

1。
A .Dickinson were written over a
period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother
and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering
E  Dickinson,
which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s
marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in
1886, outnumber
A,E 除位置外没什么大区别。
2。重心的话，我觉得或你觉得都没用，作者要强调哪个就强调哪个，只要没逻辑错误。颠倒的话到犯了改变句子原意的错误。我觉得选A.

bmwedward

Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.

A.      Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering

 E.       Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber

認同smoker 看法, 就是句意問題了!!

但小弟也認可billytang1980 較對!!

因為選項A的主詞為Dickinson's letters 這樣一來, 它就有兩個動詞were written over........outnumbering( and outnumber的省略), 但請注意後面有個her letters to anyone, 如果原句為outnumbering 有可能修飾1886故有歧異, 不選

相對之下(E)來的清楚多, Which 後面整句修飾Dickinson's letters, outnumber又為letters 之動詞, 故選E

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