OG 12 SC 50

sharon20

According to some analysts, the gains in the stock
market reflect growing confidence that the economy
will avoid the recession that many had feared earlier in
the year and instead come in for a "soft landing,"
followed by a gradual increase in business activity.
正确(A) that the economy will avoid the recession
that many had feared earlier in the year and
instead come
(B) in the economy to avoid the recession, what
many feared earlier in the year, rather to come
(C) in the economy's ability to avoid the recession,
something earlier in the year many had feared,
and instead to come
(D) in the economy to avoid the recession many
were fearing earlier in the year, and rather
to come
(E) that the economy will avoid the recession that
was feared earlier this year by many, with it
instead coming
不理解OG 对D的解释： E    The passive voice construction that was
feared ... is weak and wordy; with it instead
coming is awkward, wordy, and ungrammatical.   有可能是It指代不清 ，可以指economy 或者是recession但是总之还是不明白，这句话到底是怎么出问题？？

clairexuan9

E 中这句话就不通， that the economy will avoid the recession that was feared by many, many ， many people? or many other things？ with it, it 这样感觉既可以指代economy 又可以指代recession, 因为前面有2个名词。

sharon20

E 中这句话就不通， that the economy will avoid the recession that was feared by many, many ， many people? or many other things？ with it, it 这样感觉既可以指代economy 又可以指代recession, 因为前面有2个名词。

-- by 会员 clairexuan9 (2012/3/21 0:58:10)

我是还木有搞懂 with +宾语+宾补这个语法点，到底是修饰啥。。。

clairexuan9

E 中这句话就不通， that the economy will avoid the recession that was feared by many, many ， many people? or many other things？ with it, it 这样感觉既可以指代economy 又可以指代recession, 因为前面有2个名词。

-- by 会员 clairexuan9 (2012/3/21 0:58:10)

我是还木有搞懂 with +宾语+宾补这个语法点，到底是修饰啥。。。

-- by 会员 sharon20 (2012/3/21 1:05:04)

我觉得哈，如果GMAT真心是， comma， with, 那么comma前面的一定要是一个非常短的名词或者神马的。 比如 big flies, with its wings. 就可以。 但是一旦是一个很长的句子， big flies because it wants to see the beautiful city, 之后with。 那么通常都是错的，因为with是可以指代comma前面所有的句子，也可以就近指代comma前面的名词，容易造成歧义。

mslancaster

with在GMAT之中普遍是表示“伴随着...”这个意思的，单独出现的with开口的介词短语在GMAT中通常做状语，也可以充当独立主格成分，修饰主句主语所做的动作。

GMAC主动优于被动原则会排出这一选项，即便把E改成主动，伴随着它（代词，指代名词）coming(因为在代词/名词后，只能做动词成分，则代表正在进行）
这里有两个问题，it是单数，逻辑上伴随状语或者独立主格中的it应该指代gains,但是gains是复数
就算前面是gain单数，它之后的动词reflect是一般现在时，伴随状语中出现了进行时也很奇怪。意思是在reflect的全过程中，都coming in soft landing

你仔细体会一下我们正常说话的时候用动词ing形式表示伴随状语的语境：
I went to the lady's room, with a book holding in my hand. 我去厕所的全过程中都拿着一本书。过去时，可以表示我在刚才去了厕所，同时手里一直拿着本书。

I go to the lady's room ,with a book holding in my hand.  完蛋了，我天天上厕所，我的习惯就是每天捏着本书上厕所....

明白了没？

sharon20

with在GMAT之中普遍是表示“伴随着...”这个意思的，单独出现的with开口的介词短语在GMAT中通常做状语，也可以充当独立主格成分，修饰主句主语所做的动作。

GMAC主动优于被动原则会排出这一选项，即便把E改成主动，伴随着它（代词，指代名词）coming(因为在代词/名词后，只能做动词成分，则代表正在进行）
这里有两个问题，it是单数，逻辑上伴随状语或者独立主格中的it应该指代gains,但是gains是复数
就算前面是gain单数，它之后的动词reflect是一般现在时，伴随状语中出现了进行时也很奇怪。意思是在reflect的全过程中，都coming in soft landing

你仔细体会一下我们正常说话的时候用动词ing形式表示伴随状语的语境：
I went to the lady's room, with a book holding in my hand. 我去厕所的全过程中都拿着一本书。过去时，可以表示我在刚才去了厕所，同时手里一直拿着本书。

I go to the lady's room ,with a book holding in my hand.  完蛋了，我天天上厕所，我的习惯就是每天捏着本书上厕所....

明白了没？

-- by 会员 mslancaster (2012/3/21 4:07:27)

谢谢你，解释的很清楚~祝你人品大爆发啦~