1.ETS可强调句子的美感了,像这种主从句每个elements都平行对称的选项,几乎全部都是正确选项。 2.OG188
As a result of medical advances, many people who might once have died in childhood of such infections as diphtheria, pneumonia, or rheumatic fever now live well into old age.
you cannot place died after in childhood coz the clause wont parallel to now live well into old age in that case. you cant change the sentence into ...might once have died of such infections....in childhood neither because the phrase of ... is too long and ETS prefer to put long elements in the end of the sentences. see OG11 71 ......, doubling to twelve the number of satellites now known to orbit the distant planet. normal order should be: double the number to twelve or OG11 93 …powers enabling it to withhold from the public the identities of its sources of intelligence information. Normal order should be withhold the identities from the public. plus childhood of infections doesnt make any sence, so it is clear that of infections does not modify childhood.
3. 关于副词形容词改不改的问题,要揣摩原题的意思 像OG 195 seeming unlimited number在美国人眼里完全没意义,摆明了是seemingly unlimited number,所以就要改。 但是OG108 recent extended sales slum 和 recently extended sales slum都 make sense. 所以就尊重原选项的那个意思了。
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