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新G题号：102



题目



The following was written as a part of an application for a small-business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe. Jazz music is extremely popular in the city of Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe's annual jazz festival last summer, and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,' which airs every weeknight. Also, a number of well-known jazz musicians own homes in Monroe. Nevertheless, the nearest jazz club is over an hour away. Given the popularity of jazz in Monroe and a recent nationwide study indicating that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment, we predict that our new jazz music club in Monroe will be a tremendously profitable enterprise."



写作要求



Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.



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In this argument, the author assumes that a new planned jazz music club in Monoroe will make a great profit, since the local spend thousand dollars per year on jazz entertainment and those who desire to go a jazz club drive an hour to get there. Moreover, a lot of travelers come there in order to attend jazz festival annually. The argument seems unpersuasive, since the evident is not well-supported. The author needs to add more details in order for readers to evaluate the argument.





First, even though jazz music is popular and the top one electronic station in the town, there is no evidence showing the relationship that those who listen to the station will go to a club, they rather listen to jazz music at home than go to a jazz club.The author needs to build the bridge between these two things and aims this information to the argument.

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