在Manhattan论坛上看到的一个题目，关于时间状语的位置，欢迎大家指导，讨论

ainiAnnie

在Manhattan论坛上看到的一个题目，关于时间状语的位置，欢迎大家指导，讨论

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

答案：D

这道题目的其他语法点我基本了解了，可是关于时间状语位置这个语法点，我无法体会，或者说体会不深。

在A选项中in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who…有一种她在1909年以前或者以后不再是 novelist的感觉,（baby姐说的，自己一开始都没注意），

而C选中，我觉得nd in 1909 she became the first woman这样的表述是没有问题的（仅考虑时间状语，其他错误先不考虑）

DE纠结了…我可以感觉到became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win更好一点，仅强调她在1909年获得奖项，但是E.in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won…又传达了什么意思呢？细微之处无法体会，请NN指点~~~~thx~~

Suri在奋斗

分词短语与逻辑主语之间插入东西不好
    Ving, svo
    中间不要插入类似于时间状语云云的东西
你去看prep08  172题

ainiAnnie

分词短语与逻辑主语之间插入东西不好
    Ving, svo
    中间不要插入类似于时间状语云云的东西
你去看prep08  172题

-- by 会员 Suri在奋斗 (2012/3/14 17:09:09)

谢谢亲解答，这个我知道呢，我想问的是 became in 1909 和 in 1909 became 有什么差别，体会不了，感觉前面的更好点。。。。

ainiAnnie

又仔细体会了一下，貌似是这样的，
Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also...只是限定她在1909作为第一位女性以及第一位S藉作家获得年获得了N奖。
in 1909 becaming the first woman and also... 好像在说她1909年之前或者之后都不是作家的感觉，限定的太多了，不仅仅限定了became这一个动作。

Suri在奋斗

今天重新看og，再给你看个你可能做了的题目
3. Although various eighteenth- and nineteenth-century
American poets had professed an interest in
Native American poetry and had pretended to imitate
Native American forms in their own works, until almost
1900, scholars and critics did not begin seriously to
study traditional Native American poetry in native
languages.
(A) until almost 1900, scholars and critics did not
begin seriously to study
(B) until almost 1900 scholars and critics had not
begun seriously studying
(C) not until almost 1900 were scholars and critics
to begin seriously to study
(D) it was not almost until 1900 when scholars and
critics began to seriously study
(E) it was not until almost 1900 that scholars and
critics seriously began studying
你看og对A的解释，but the
placement of until almost 1900 is
problematic
为什么这样说呢，在manhattan上找到的解释
“Until almost 1900 is confusing. Does it refer back to
the first verb or forward to the next verb?” In answer choice
A, we’re not sure which action took place “until almost
1900.” None of the answer choices pairs that time marker
with the first action (had professed / had pretended). Some
of the answers do place that time marker unambiguously
with the second action (began studying), including the
correct answer

状语的位置不容忽视，因为这个modifier的一个小变动就带动了句意的稍微偏差，而今天看baby姐姐分享的帖子，在实战今后的sc考试中对modifier的考察将更为细致，对句子理解的理解尤其关键

包括 s ,Ving ,V+o这样的句型，ving插在中间到底是做定语向前修饰S呢还是向后做状语修饰后面的谓语呢
尽管，og 21题正确答案就是s,ving V+O
但是把ving插在中间大多时候还是不要，会引起一点歧义

也不知道说没说到点子上，就今天碰巧又看见一题哈~~

Suri在奋斗

再看一个，因为是讲的是时间状语的问题，所以，着重看时间状语，其他的主谓一致先不说
As its sales of computer products have surpassed
those of measuring instruments, the company has
become increasingly willing to compete for the mass
market sales they would in the past have conceded
to rivals.
(A) they would in the past have conceded to rivals
(B) they would have conceded previously to their
rivals
(C) that in the past would have been conceded
previously to rivals
(D) it previously would have conceded to rivals in
the past
(E) it would in the past have conceded to rivals
D Th e placement of in the past makes it unclear
whether it is supposed to modify rivals or
would have conceded; if the latter, then it is
redundant

好好琢磨og关于d项时间状语的解释

ainiAnnie

再看一个，因为是讲的是时间状语的问题，所以，着重看时间状语，其他的主谓一致先不说
As its sales of computer products have surpassed
those of measuring instruments, the company has
become increasingly willing to compete for the mass
market sales they would in the past have conceded
to rivals.
(A) they would in the past have conceded to rivals
(B) they would have conceded previously to their
rivals
(C) that in the past would have been conceded
previously to rivals
(D) it previously would have conceded to rivals in
the past
(E) it would in the past have conceded to rivals
D Th e placement of in the past makes it unclear
whether it is supposed to modify rivals or
would have conceded; if the latter, then it is
redundant

好好琢磨og关于d项时间状语的解释

-- by 会员 Suri在奋斗 (2012/3/15 9:47:32)

恩，亲~你真好~~~~大爱~~~