issue 4 求拍

landscape1987

4.Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways thatno speaker or reformer ever could.


Writing:

      Personally I think scandals are very usefulto reflect many social problems that hidden to public or covered by somepersons who do not want to leak them out to raise bad influences about his/herreputation or behalf.
     That scandals based on reality canreflect problems and it is good for discovering problems and for make improvementsin fields such as education, law, morality, business and so on.
      For example in education, in these days,education workers only want to push tons of knowledge into students brainsregardless their emotional health and ability to bear difficulties fromsociety. Many students, both in middle schools and university, suicide becauseof hard works from school, frustrations about be discriminated from others,betrayed by friends or other pressures. Educational institutions only concernthe mark, homework, they seldom educate students to develop a healthy emotionto face different kinds of difficulties in study, loving, work, life,communication and so on. But the death of students is bad for school reputationso the faculties always try to cover the details. Only scandals leaked outthese messages and spread in public, so educational institutions now attachstudents psychological health to importance.
     Inlaw, everyone is equal in society no matter one is officer or a common citizen.But many scandals reflect problems that differences between officers and commonpeople still exist. In China, officers drive cars after drinking lot of wineand run fast in street filled with people,  hitting and crashing many innocent people. Policemen come to stop him,he says he is an officer or he knows an officer. He should not be punished andtake responsibilities for the accident. The wounded or relatives of deadpersons have no idea to accuse him because he is an officer, officers canregardless of morality and law.
The local government wants to coverinformation by hide the officer and restrict police investigation. But scandalsare spread in public and many people realize the weakness of monitor of law.Some brave media report it, government faces pressures in society and eventuallyconfess their faults. So scandals sometimes can push law more equal.
So I think scandalsare useful but they should not break legal privacy.      

landscape1987

怎么没人拍

竹林中人

顶上去

landscape1987

谢谢斑竹

竹林中人

感觉这篇文章写的不很充分，内容显得单薄了，题目because后面的内容貌似在文章中没有很好地写到

landscape1987

谢谢斑竹

竹林中人

谢谢斑竹

-- by 会员 landscape1987 (2012/2/24 22:15:06)

LZ怎么感觉消失了一段时间啊，坚持写哦

landscape1987

謝謝鼓勵

红衫骁将

看这篇作文简直就是挑战我的忍耐极限呀