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sam881030

44. In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for society to regard any living
man or woman as a hero.






With the mass popularity of heros' stories in plots and movies nowadays, it seems that people
are in fact favoring the existence of heros in the real world. However, why does the image of heros so diffcult
to find in the television nowadays? Are heros not possible to exist any more? From my perspective, heros
still exist, if the definition of heros are broaden, but they are not favourable to be revealed.  


Admittedly, due to the pellucidity of the media and the advancement in technology, most of the supernatural
phenomena could be easily explained and transmitted to the public, therefore the public is not likely to
believe in the existence of any supernatural heros, as in the science fictions and movies. Instead of
waiting the show-up of the Batman to fight against the evil, people are relied on the police and arthorities.
Therefore, if defining heros as beings with supernatural powers, they are not likely to be found nowadays.


Additionally, for those countries where heroism is still favoured, the credibility of hero propaganda is
questioned. It is not difficult to find that most of these countries, such as Cuba and North Korea, are
ruled under aristocracy and dictatorship. Therefore, in these places, heros could be served as the tools for
the government to advocate the well-being of citizens, or even the diffraction of public focus on their
terrible governing. For instance, North Korea, where is ruled under the King's dominance,
is putting significant effort on sculpturing the heroine figure of the King in order to have all the people to
admire and obey their leader. While the North Koreans are not aware that it is the terrible governance
that resulted in the poor economy development.


However, if defining heros as the people who have significant achievement to their field,I believe heros
do exist. Neverthetheless, the revealation of heros are still an issue.


In a present age where the media is following the taste of the public, it is less likely to broadcast
the accomplishments of heros since they are not very attractive to the public anymore. It may sound
unfamiliar and thus boring to people on great scientific achievements completed by the scientist, or
artists who have completed a master piece. According to the trend of television programs it could be
observed that what people really cares are the aspects relative to their lives, such as the economy
development of the country, or the subjects that bring relaxation and enjoyment, such as music and movies.


In the age when people draw little attention to the scientific and cultural development, I believe it is
necessary to start the propagation of the "heroic achievements"-scientific, artistic and any other great
accomplishments. With this approach, their achievements would be recognized by the public, which not only
improves the awareness of the public towards these fields, but also provides higher possibilities for scientists and
artists to obtain sufficient funds for further reasearch and development.


In conclusion, it is to be admit that the believe in supernatural heros are no longer existed due to the
media coverage and scientific development. Yet if heros are defined as people with great achievement on their
fields, they not only indeed existed but also requires more attention from the public than now.

普渡哥

现今媒体对英雄产生的影响：
会报道各种问题，比如他们的隐私，会让大家看到他们也有软弱，也是正常的人。比如他们也会和老婆吵架。。。

媒体对英雄产生的好处：
可以迅速传播英雄事迹。

真正的英雄不需要扬名，历史会证明一切。

this one is much better...加油！！

一只麋鹿么

the belief in the supernatural
in their fields

jz20000cn

是啊。作文就要每天在cd写

sam881030

谢谢大家尤其是普渡哥：）

lukebrehm

However, why is the image of heroes so difficult to find on television nowadays? Is it impossible that heroes exist any more? From my perspective, heroes still exist, if the definition of heroes is broadened, but they are not favored to be revealed.  

As you can see I only made some slight changes but it can be read with a lot more ease this way.

Notes:

1. Hero plural is Heroes
2. "on television" not "in television"
3. nowadays may not be a very proper word to use, maybe something like "in recent years"

Great work! I find the best thing you can do is read some well written English works. Have you read some C.S. Lewis' works? An extremely notable author! And of course another useful thing is to let people criticize, which you've already done

lukebrehm

hope it was helpful

Alex8

英雄的视野角度