总结了下,望指正 In Hungary, as in much of Eastern Europe, an overwhelming proportion of women work, many of which are in middle management and light industry.
A. as in much of Eastern Europe, an overwhelming proportion of women work, many of which are in 1. 不能用which 指代women, 应该改为whom; B. as with much of Eastern Europe, an overwhelming proportion of women works, many in 1. With 与前面的in Hungary 不平衡,应该为in;2.中心词是women,谓语动词应该用复数work。 C. as in much of Eastern Europe, an overwhelming proportion of women work, many of them in 1. an overwhelming proportion of为形容词,表示很大一部分的,其中心词是women,应该用复数;2. Many of them 的用法正确,为独立主格而且简洁;3. As in much of Eastern Europe 后面正确的省略了an overwhelming proportion of women work, D. like much of Eastern Europe, an overwhelming proportion of women works, and many are 1.like 后面应该接in Hungary,但是in为介词,like后面不能接介词,则就不能用like这种用法; 2.中心词是women,谓语动词应该用复数work; 3.and后面,many are 与前面的结构没有平衡关系 E. like much of Eastern Europe, an overwhelming proportion of women work, many are in 1.like 后面应该接in Hungary, 但是in为介词,like后面不能接介词,则就不能用like这种用法;2.many are in 造成sentence fragment
an overwhelming proportion of为形容词,表示很大一部分的,其中心词是women, 应该用复数;若an overwhelming proportion of后面加单数的话,谓语动词为单数。 类似的还有a (large) number of… 。但是,the number of …表示的单数, 中心词是the number, 意为…的数目是多少。
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